Now im not gonna lie, this kind of romance(in which most romance stories follow the same formula with)annoy me alot. Having a male and female character falling in love for the sake of romance.

Hmmm either im grabbing at nothing or that last bit might be a tease at Solona and Kallian getting together.

Hey, a woman can dream cant she?

Well if you decide to go cliche on us, its gonna be at the worst possible moment that Aedan will find out about her magic.

Thats actually quite true.
Of the six origins, 2 of them CAN survive, two of them are a 50/50 chance or surviving or dieing, while the other two(unless you play as them)are basically dead.
Human Noble Origin/Mage Origin: Can Survive
Noble-Dwarf Origin/City Elf Origin: 50/50
Dalish Elf Origin/Commoner Dwarf Origin: Dead

This is an awesome story! I stayed up way too late reading it. Outstanding character and plot development. Not once did I go WTF. Each relationship developed organically without excessive angst. I also liked how you developed the Couslands. That was very unique and very well done.

Easily one of my favorites.

Sorry to say, but the City Elf, to my opinion, was the worst Origins story of them all.

Just finished reading HoH and I've got to say this is really awesome! I never saw that plot twist where Solona suddenly reappeared coming, I honestly thought you had killed her off. Also you have good style and creative ideas. It was great fun to read this story :)

tbh I'm dying to find out who your warden is

interesting story overall. any chance of a sequel?

for some reason i was thinking that Alistair was Duncan in this chapter, and i was going to comment that Duncan was a thief before he became a grey warden, and thus was far more likely to detect the thief than the dalish was . then i realized this was post-ostagar.

personally, my favorite class to play as is a mage. though from a narrative standpoint, the human noble origin is the best.

I KNEW SHE LIVED THAT WAS SO SATISFYING.

Awww, I actually really adore Anora. I understand Theron's wariness towards her, though - she wouldn't be too happy with him, yes.

I like the vagueness; with his character, it's plausible to go one way or another. Let's see how it all rolls on out!

Yayyyyyy, they're together! I'm also really liking the Theron development, too, and the slavery/blood Mage arc was handled really well.

Only a few chapters left, sadly... But it's a good fic.

It's not canon - Loghain didn't know about the letters, the plan was actually good/plausible until the beacon was lit late, and I believe Loghain argued with Cailan about not being on the front lines. The reason Howe didn't take care of Fergus is probably that he was waiting for him to return to an easier location to kill him.

Overall, though, I'm enjoying this a lot. Theron's grown on me, poor boy... It's a great fanfic.