I loved it

This wasn’t good at all their character bases kind of sucked in there in England they’re not supposed to be in England there is a post to be in Korea or was Japan those two places would’ve been way better I get them being older but the characters don’t seem like they would develop like that at all and It seems completely redundant or do you just want to make a lemon so you just use them just make a smart next time with your own characters Because it didn’t work you were just using The characters names

aww why would u end it there that sucks so bad

NASTY!

Nasty mind of yours but awesome try to make a normal story next rocks!

wut the hell this is fuckin messed up like SHES LIKE 10 YEARS YOUNGER IKUTO IS A COUGER WIFE ;O

goof

lol I loved your warning it made me laugh XD. and the story was great, your good at lemons.

Yaya pervertedness

FUUUUUCK! I love your story and now you're telling me you can't write it? Nooooooooooooooooooooo! Please move to a place where you can write it. I beg of you! I know you probably won't pay any attention to this but DEFINITELY WRITE MORE!3:(

It was amazing! I was going to be so angry when you said that you wouldn't update until next year but luckily I saw the next sign. Pwew:)

Please continue, everyone writes lemon anyway, don't ruin this for all the people that love this story :(

No one follows that m still means lemons! and I loved this story

so lustful i love it XP

i'm very correct you story is much better without a horror flick in the background