Reviews for A Sinner Before the Gates of Heaven |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love this alternate take on my OTP. Please do update this one, really want to see where this goes. Love your writing by the way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I actually hope you think about finishing this. Such an interesting take on TVD from anything I have seen on here and it’s really a cool concept. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, hell. I really need to learn to check on the status of a fic before I go and get myself all invested in it. I really enjoyed this story. As much of it as there is to be had, anyway. Your character development is interesting and deep, and your plot even more so. I'm usually wary of AUs, but this one definitely makes its own way while still keeping enough in common with the canon go be really excellent as fanfiction. I'm very sad that it will probably never be updated, and I'll never get to find out what the heck happened in 1864. |
![]() ![]() Don't suppose you've thought about continuing this? It's really good |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well I am hoping that since it is now summer that you are going to be able to write some more and please remember the plot because it is killing me not knowing how this is going to go and what the heck was Grayson going to tell Miranda and have you ever read any of these Christine Feehan stories? She has a Carpathian series that has bonded males which reminded me of how Stefan was with Caroline and I LOVE it! Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok to heck with 3x19 this is freaking amazing! I loved this chapter and I loved the interaction that occurs between all of them and omg so Caroline! 3 3 3 it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally the kiss! WOOHOO! Wow if the lead into that was this amazing I can't imagine how you are going to wrap the rest of this up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wondered if Katherine was going to make an appearance, and I LOVE that you have her with Elijah, I thought after they showed when she became a vampire that he had loved her then and Klaus got in the way of that. I don't know after what happened in season 4 if she can redeem herself enough for Elijah, but I would love to see her be able to find the girl that Elijah feel in love with 500 years ago. That being said I can't wait to see what your Katherine is like! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok seriously? wow! I so hope it isn't another six months before you get these reviews, because holy cow you have me hooked! Heck yes these are awesome chapters and I think after all you went through in real life between chapter 7 and chapter 8 you came back to this story pretty well! I am still on pins and needles about what the heck Grayson knows! Love the twists that you have created for them in your world! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I actually like it, and I want to know what Grayson knows, I get the feeling that it would help Damon figure it out and somehow the curse is them loving each other...or I don't know it is seriously a mystery and I am totally hooked on mysteries! LOVE |
![]() ![]() ![]() Totally loving this forever mate idea and the fact that it would be our Damon that would love first. They really do have this amazing chemistry and amazing story. Meant to be just springs to mind. So loving this and yes Elijah is the perfect "narrator" with his calm, honorable, inner dialogue! Love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK this is seriously got me jonesing for more and I haven't even reached the end of what you have written yet! I so hope your muse hasn't jetted on you. If he has drag his Dark haired, amazing blue eyed handsome butt over and tell him that those of us that are reading this story are seriously hooked and need some more of this amazing story because although the season 4 finale was good and actually surprised me a few times, the rest of season 4 was enough to make you hurl your tv across a room and we need GOOD stories to keep us going! I am not above stroking his ego for you so that we get more chapters! hehe! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok I am loving this! Having Sheila and the whole spell and she can't tell it thing, of course we had to have Judgy...er I mean Bonnie around too of course, but I LOVE that Damon respects Sheila! And the Damon we all love clapping as she makes it to the bottom of the tree and ok "Thrice they shall be saved. Two entities intertwined by fate's hand, one the only thing in this world that will give love boundless until forgiveness from the other is asked for." Seriously? Could you be anymore vague yet give just enough information that is makes you feel like you do when you look at someone and their name is just on the tip of your tongue but it won't fall from your lips? Epic, ok I need a new adjective! BUT also love that Caroline and Stefan are together. Honestly I could see them making a good pair. I am going to be super bummed when I reach chapter 12 if this isn't finished! Can you hear Update, Update, Update, being chanted in the background here? LOL! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh this is freaking Epic, love it. The crazy thing is that just yesterday I thought about Bat out of hell and bat out of hell II and pulled them up and was jamming to them with my kids! Then today I find your story! I am loving it and love the transitional chapter, which I have to admit I don't normally like, but this one was really good! Totally have me intrigued! Heading to chapter 4! |