I enjoyed the read. It expressed both their pain and suffering while keeping the story centered on one event in their time. And you left it open for the reader to imagine what would happen next.

Lovely story - the angst was great. Love the ending

Lovely story. I did not expect Kagome to feel the same way. Nice twist.

That was...wow. That was powerful. I just...wow. For Sesshomaru to ask Kagome to kill him was one thing, but then for her to ask the same of him...I wow. You did an amazing job. I truly enjoyed reading that.

Thought provoking and something else that I can't quite put my finger on. Perhaps nostalgia

Hauntingly written, lovely story! Please continue it (pretty please with a cherry on top? :3)

My! Like other readers said I don't get why you have few reviews for this shot.. I found it different in a lovely way and sad. Would it be nice to have more chapters :) .Thank you for sharing your talent.

Okay.

Lovely and sad.
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I don't see how there r only 16 reviews for this chapter it is absolutely amazing, u should make more chapters for this

That was great! I loved it! Have you considered continuing it?

Love this one too :)

I really enjoyed this,it was unexpectedly intense. I would love to know what happens next and I can only imagine how great it would be as a longer story.

This story is awesome. Also so are spiked watermelons. Which makes a winning combination

This story is great. Have you ever thought of a continueation?