This is simply beautiful. Your style of writing is perfect. I can't stop crying!

me, reading the sentence "Somewhere along the way, it became a little too passionate.": so... what. you got deeply invested into the story...?

me, remembering the sentence "Somewhere along the way, it became a little too passionate.": OHHHHHHH

not joking when i say i didn't know what you meant until THAT part.

I really liked this story. It was short and kinda cliche, but it was also quite well written, satisfying and emotionally captivating. Simple angst and longing are always fun to portray because they are so core to real human emotion, and thus very relatable to see in a character.

You have my thanks for sharing your excellent work.

Huh well it is a unique take on red's character and i have to admit... Would have thought he was the young genius that was more in control of his feelings XD

this is legitimately the best originalshipping fanfiction i have ever read. i know this is a bit late i mean it's october 2015 /but/ i never fucking cry. but with this fic, it always has been an exception and i don't even know why just well done on this.

Amazing story. The journey Green goes through up to the end where he sees Red again was saddening but so joyous when Red admits he had the same feelings as well. Very powerful! :D

I had seen this on a recommendation list for Red x Green fics, and I must say, I am not disappointed! This fanfiction was truly heartfelt, and I absolutely loved how you played out the characters. In most Red x Green fics I have read, it is always Red who runs away (often to Mount Silver) and Green who chases. In this one, I found it particularly pleasing about the reverse scenario.

this is beautiful ;-;

I like the melancholic atmosphere you gave this fic.

Write on.!
Yuna

Awww

Um... if you still remember, can you tell me what shoujo manga you were talking about? The one that you said you based the crying scene off of?

This almost brought me to legit tears ;u; You did a wonderful job of writing this!

I've always kinda perfer Green/Blue falling 4 red instead :3 i liked this

This was beautiful. Somehow angst always produces the most beautiful writing. I was prepared for heartbreak, but then unexpectedly there was a happy ending anyway. Fortunately for Green (and Red too).

'The two of them were lock and key, made for and existing for each other. They were fated rivals but shared the deepest bonds. They were inseparable. They were Red and Green.

They are Red and Green

And Leaf.'

I like how you described their bond, unbreakable and like two sides of the same coin. I could quote some more lines because there were a lot of great ones. I also liked how you included some parts of Green travelling to other regions, him meeting Lucas, being on Sunnyshore beach, etc. It's always nice to see things of the Pokémon world and sort of bring the parts from the game to life.

Good story, thanks!

Oh how I love this story! I'm so lucky I found it :) this is what I'm always craving for, a story where green 'leaves" and red 'chases', because it's always the other way around! And I love how leaf supported both of them! And I know this is troublesome, and that you published this since a long time ago (maybe you don't even ship this anymore?) But I really want to see this in red's pov! I want to know what he's thinking when he rejects green, when green leaves as well as when he founds green. Red is very hard to read, so I think that it'll be good to know what's in his mind. I'm sorry if I disturb you, this is just a suggestion, because I really love this story! Thank you for writing this!