Please dont leave me like this! I need it! I want to read the fun part! How can i get it?!

I liked your fanfic so much! that i stole it and im fixing it on office word so i can print it and have it on my personal library... so i will read it as much as i can! youre a genius! i absolutely love your job!
your book (this fic, cause right now im at the 150 page, and im on chapter 4!) its gonna be a treasure among all my books

Great story, such a fantastic au

Also, this version of Kal-El is easier to imagine today due to the Witcher. although I only imagine this as the New 52 character's, Henry Cavil being the Witcher and his roughish yet honarable character is very similar to this one.

I can't believe it's been two years since I found this story and you completing it. the update date 2018 threw me off because I didn't think it was that long before I found the 24 chapters of pure DC mind porn.
By far the most realistic and creative idea, and I needed a quick fix on motivating myself for the Superman Wonder Woman fanfiction I am writing, inspired by you a lot.
A man without a past isn't something to joke about. when a family friend met with an accident that got him temporary amnesia, he was Frantic. everyday searching for answers on his past, especially when he couldn't remember his deceased family.

the ending though, always wrenches my heart, the 40 year time skip always makes me feel the end we all will eventually come across.

I see some of the Batman fans pissed. but they have to understand, this is a Superman story and yet you have given life to that character with effort. of course they can't always expect him to take the attention in every fic and be a hypocrite when Superman does so. I love Batman, because he adds contrast to Superman by the mere fact that Kal is more human than any in the league and Bruce is more alien than any alien in the league. but many don't appreciate this balance and want Batman at the top in all cases. well, they can find that in 80% of this fandom. just let us SSWW have this.

I can't thank you enough for making this happen and completing it.
hope you are safe in quarantine and I really hope you manage to get into DC comic without Warner Bros strong arming you because it will be a historic day for SSWW fans if you make it in.

Really good start!

The Best Fanfiction I ever read! DC better buy this

I agree with the other reviewer. Don’t listen to the haters, truly enjoyed the story

Dont listen to the Batman fans, in all actuality he is a dick even if its not your intention to make him one. I think youve potrayed him 100% accurate

Hi,

Very illogical... The plot is created on the assumption that he doesn't know his past... WHY?

It feels forced.

This stroy is my absolute favorite.
Thank you for your time and dedication writing this beautiful work of art!

I don't know whether you want to deal with crossovers, but I can imagine a good one with Avengers. As they are leaving earth, they were caught in an inter dimensional rift which takes them to avengers universe right in the middle of war with Loki.

I don't know how to say this but even after 7 years you still have misspellings, grammar errors, punctuation errors, & even concept errors. All-in-all it's still a very good story. You just need a genuinely professional editor to clear up the problem areas. Part of me is surprised that "Clark Kent" didn't become a permanent fixture. Part of me is extremely pleased at how rapidly you dropped Lois. Looking back I can see that Lois was mostly written as being determined to becoming "Mrs. SM" with no writer considering the consequences. Anyway, WW being who & what she is she & SM could easily return with at least 4 more kids.

Someone finally remembered Animal Man! You have several misspellings, grammar errors, & even some punctuation errors.