Reviews for Unpredictable |
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![]() ![]() ![]() please continue please i really love this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this ontake of thr story! Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() please continue please |
![]() ![]() Who shot Bella!? How could they!? Update soon! Rose! Protect the angel! Good luck |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pleeeeeaaaaassee update soon! I really like your story so far and you haven't updated in years! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please finish i love your story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() pls. update |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok now ive read ur fanfic, did u get the angel thing frm the vamp diaries, when elena has angelwings? btw i love ur fanfic, its really gd, btw UR EVIL! HOW CLD U DO THIS 2 ME? A CLIFFHANGER? pleasssseee updatE lyk 2nite! |
![]() ![]() ![]() 1st of all, i havent read ur chapter yet 2nd. im reviewing just bcoz of ur name 3rd. I LOVE UR NAME AND I AGREEE! 4. TEAM DAMON 4EVA! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think that would be a great idea. you should alternate between Rosalie and Bella's POV. Btw, loved this chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter though it is a bit short. I personally like to hear it from Rosalie's POV, but I think it would give the story a bit more depth if we also heard what Bella thinks about the entire situation. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it so far. A bit more detail and care when doing dialogues wouldn't be amiss, but it's coming along nicely. I personally would like it in BPOV and RPOV throughout the story, but it's your deal. Looking forward to finding out what's going on with Bella. |
![]() ![]() ![]() .. ..plzz.. Anthousa xoxo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter again, I would like to see Bella's POV too. |