THAT WAS SO CUTE! and fili's reaction was priceless~

That was super cute, and really great for a first fanfic! I love how spain was almost as awkward as romano at times it made him more adorable. :) Really well written, too, it was awesome! I also thought it was super funny when there was, like, innuendo or something, and they would both blush it was funny. Keep writting!

awww

Cute Spamano story, I liked it. :] Hope you'll write more in the future-!

That was amazingly hilarious. I love how for once lovi was oblivious.

Aww this story was so cute! You know this is my first time reading a multi-chapter Spamano story that isn't M and I enjoyed it XD

-JAF

awwww i could just melt!

I'm fight, idiot," Lovino protested. It's supposed to be i'm fine

XD

My goodness, this story was so sweet and cute. From the amount of heat raised in Lovino's cheeks during the story, I was worried he would fry his brain. Anyway, I loved it.

I love this story! It's wonderful, and best of all, believable. I'm so glad I came across this!

One problem: you write Francis speaking correct French most of the time, but I've come across one glaring mistake in this chapter (7). Francis says "Bonjour, mon amis."

Thing is, it should be written as "Bonjour, mes amis."

In English we make things plural by adding an "s" to the end of nouns. In French, the verb forms are changed in order to make the noun plural.

If the group of friends described has at least one male, and "mes amies" if all female.

French is my native language; I'll notify you if I find any more mistakes.

that, is adoreable

i love it XD

its Ellos escriben

great story

AWWWWW~~~! *fangirl-rampage* Seen the signs in pasta, WTF? Of course Francis knew it. He just know that kind of stuff. And again AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWW~~~~~~~~~~~~~~!

OMG OMG OMG. YOU SHOULD MAKE A SQUEAL. D: I DEMAND A SQUEAL. TTTT (Yes, I am very demanding. :33)