well done plz update soon

I love this sooo much! I wish this actually happened.
If Charlie had still been around Bianca and Heath would've made up a lot quicker and this whole Adam thing wouldn't have happened.

I got a bit confused when Charlie was 3 months pregnant and then 2 weeks later she was 5 months pregnant, but that doesn't matter too much :p
Also, it's not 'lied down' it's 'lay down' but we get the point anyway.

Good Work xxx Keep the Chax love going 3
you make it so realistic and I can imagine all their voices and all the scenes in my head, like I'm watching it.

Love it

Please continue this it's a amazing story update soon please xx

I love your story and I hope you will update it again soon! It's so nice to read about how they could have been if the writers didn't stuff it up! :)

You are a fantastic story writer..Just wondering if there will be anymore chapters,as these are fantastic..

Is there going to be anymore chapters to your story? :)

Love this! Is there going to be anymore chapters?

No more?

Great chapter and i can't wait for your next update so please update soon :)

that chapter was great! naaw, Olivia telling Ruby about the ring! She is soo cute! Please update soon! You are a fantastic writer! xx

Gotta love kids ... Olivia telling Ruby bout the ring was cute lol & how romantic was Casey so glad Rubes said yes .. Oohh & I loved how excited Charlie was about it all

Please update soon xx

hehe cute chapter :) I love the way Casey proposed! Looking forward to your next chapter! Xx

Ruby & Brax at the start were so sweet & her calling him dad naww :-) Poor Casey when Charlie said no ... Can't wait for the proposal :-)

Awesome update, more soon please :-) xx

Aww cute chapter..I love that Casey asked for Charlie's permission! :D Xx