HOW DARE 'THAT MANI'm not giving any spoilers) THREATEN NARUTO AND RYO AND TRY TO FUCKING KILL THEM BOTH! I'm so glad they got away! (Sorry but I love gypsies better then nobles.) I don't blame Naruto for killing that filthy man he went after Ryo his baby a mother will kill anyone who dare try to harm their baby it's a known fact. (Oh so that's what happened to the note well what an unfortunate accident..) The only thing I'm upset about is that Naruto has only ever slept with Sasuke while Sasuke has probably fucked many other men and women..heck even if he has just fucked one other and it meant nothing I'd still be pissed because that's so unfair.. (That wasn't sex...that was love making... passionate, erotic, and sensual love making...it was beautiful) I love how Naruto could care less if he got pregnant again and then when Sasuke asked Naruto to marry him so casually XD.

Naruto is such a good Mommy and will be such a good Wife/Bride..I can already tell Naruto is going to end up with Sasuke they are in love..(Oh..I see what your doing you love Shikamaru (heck who doesn't I love him too I'd marry him if I could) so you use your OC Kyo to be with him because she is like a remake of yourself so technically Shikamaru is shipped with yourself..I saw this coming..) Yay I see KibaHina in the future! (I really love the concept of gypsy boys stealing/taking their desired love interest instead of all that courting bullcrap!) Poor Iruka got put out on the spot with the cards and the palm reading..Im just the result was KakaIru! (That little moment when Sasuke was admiring Naruto's body functions and nipples while the blond fed Ryo had me fanboying s freaking hard..and when he sucked on those nipples..complimenting on the taste of his milk..oh that got me horny..) You can't deny the connection Sasuke and Naruto share they are practically soul mates..The passion and love they share..They are obviously going to end up together.. (I fucking love ItaNeji! it's so sexy and cute! It's so rare to find ItaNeji anywhere so I'm super happy to see that ship in this book! I hope Neji will be able to birth Itachi some beautiful strong children! It's so cute how Itachi was like 'I would like that very much' and then they shared a loving kiss..) WHY YOU LEAVE A CLIFF HANGER LIKE THAT! Oh god who was that man/women?! All I care about is if Naruto and Ryo are ok they'd better be ok!

(Also I must warn you my comments are always super long and sometimes on rare occasions they are super short so beware XD)

I'm glad Sasuke isn't an asshole he did leave a note..though I wonder what happened to it? Also I really like Fugaku, Kakashi, Iruka, Itachi, and Mikoto so far they are so nice...(Yay Iruka can bear children that makes me so happy!) I wonder who Naruto will end up with Sasuke or Itachi? (I really want him to end up with Sasuke but to be with Itachi for awhile before that..) Narutos first dance with his male friends was so crazy and fun the second dance where Naruto danced with Ino was pretty sweet but when Naruto did the gypsy dance (Act 13) for everyone I fanboyed so hard it was so sensually beautiful it was intense and slow it was so sexual and different... (I love how Itachi and Sasukes eyes were glued on Naruto the whole way through) I wish Naruto had sang his voice was probably more beautiful then the girls... (Awee it's so cute that Naruto feeds his baby with the milk from his nipples! To be honest I hate bottles I like it when babies get fed from their mothers..) Holy shit when I heard Ryo came out of Narutos anus I kind of felt bad for him but it also made me happy I hate it when they have a C-Section when you are having a baby your supposed to feel the pain you go through for the one you love that you are bringing into the world...At least that's what I think..) So far I like Kyo (But I hope she doesn't end up with a really good Character (Like Itachi or Neji) I hate it when some OC ends up with a great character I rather them end up with another OC or a small character (Like Kiba or Choji)...I'm not saying I hate your OC I just strictly don't ship OC's with super great and important characters...)

I'm glad the baby is a boy (Ryo is so cute!)...Though I just realized Naruto is only maybe seventeen and already has a baby and the father dosen't even know because he's an asshole...I really feel sorry for Naruto but I know he's a great mother...and will take good care of his baby... (STUPID SASUKE!) I just can't get past the fact that Sasuke left Naruto...I'm glad Naruto chose anger over sadness. (I'm happy Kiba, Ino, and Sakura are Narutos friends I just hope none of them become the 'Bad guymostly SakuraAwe I love the LeeSaku 3... I really don't Naruto to meet with Sasuke what is Sasuke is married and has kids already...

Love it

too cute!

I loved this story!

uhhh, grammar mistakes that has the grammar Nazi in me twitching like a madman, but good so far XD

Darn!I crying story just like true love and everyone got happy ending!I cried so bad with Naruto POV.I can feel all his emotion fly to my fragile 're a great writer and I'm usually lazy to review. BUT,you just made my day with this lovely fanfic.:)

Plese write this next story. I want to find out more.

noooooo! i need to know what happens between these two gang leaders *pleading sad face*

Omg suck a beautiful ending i cant beleive it ended! ;A;

Lol i cant wait for the new one ghough (:

Omg i hate how i couldnt check my things! I like this n finally they are a happy family!(x

Omg who is it