Reviews for Mute |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very good story. I did though skip all the torture going on in the beginning to the point in which she was rescued. I liked it very much though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You hear that? Yes, that sound. It's the sound of my heart being twisted and pounded in ways that it was never meant to. The cringing, cracking, shattering sort of feelings that leaves your heart in broken little chunks of brittle meat bits. Bouncing around in my rib cage with each word on the page... |
![]() ![]() Sorry, forgot that you need spaces... dragonage- kink. live journal 11381. html? thread 45457781# t45457781 |
![]() ![]() This reminds me of this fill on the kink meme: . ?thread45457781#t45457781 Now that I have read this I feel like you are the only one capable of filling such a thing with such a level of dignity, poise, brutality, as you exhibited here. Def. Going on my rec list. :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful. This story, man! It sent me to the corner to cry and then pulled me out to smile at how happy I was. This was an amazing story and I look forward to not only read others that you've written, but to reread this over and over again. This was amazing. Great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my... whoa. The pain and emotions in this fanfic belong more rightly in a book. This is amazing and moving and entirely gripping. It HURTS! When she hurts, I hurt. This is the third story I've read of yours and each has been more amazing than the last in it's own right. How?! Please writing these unless you plan to take a break to write your own stuff... and in that case send me your name and your rough drafts. They would be amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa. Whoa. This. Is. Amazing. Whoa. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was disturbing, intense, and lovely. Bravo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy effing ess that was flawless and amazing and astounding and unexpected. Bravo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is beautifully done. I love the relationship your Hawke has with Fenris, the pacing is wonderful, and I simply have to say that your writing style here is spectacular in how you make the words sing. Overall, amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Be still my heart. This was utterly beautiful from start to finish and I will blame you my fabulous writing friend for my failing test grade tomorrow. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Very graphic and touching at the same time. Thank you for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was awful and dark and lovely. Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a great story. I have to admit I cried quite a bit while reading. |
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