I have to review in the middle of this. I love this story so much! Your characters are so real, well developed and intriguing and your characterization of the newsies is fantastic. A lot of the time these drama/romances come off sappy and silly but your characters are so interesting and awesome that this has been a joy to read so far. You are a great writer and you really let the reader into your characters thoughts and feelings which are very realistic. Even the newsboys accents are well done. I'm looking forward to finishing this story. Thanks for really putting effort and polish to this story, it's a joy to read!

That was an amazing story and I loved the ending. Plz write other stories!

This is such a fantastic story-your writing is impeccible and flows seamlessly with the Newsies era in a way that must have been very difficult to accomplish-period writing is always tough. Your characters are amazing and so real. Great story!

Sweet heartwarming story by the end, I loved it...you truly did a wonderful job with this story. :)

This was a sweet story, I loved it and I'm glad she and Spot didn't get in a big fight. That always happens, (almost) when there is a girl who meets Spot. It gets redundant. Loved it!

Well, I certainly enjoyed your story! I must say, I haven't watched this movie, but now I'm curious! I enjoyed your take of the story, and the characters were so likeable! Even Spot, despite his rough exterior. i especially liked Kate; wish i could be as spunky and put-together as her! Plus her hair sounded to die for! Well done, you are certainly a thorough and remarkable author, and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work in the future!

What a fantastic story! What a stupendous ending! This story was a wonderful pleasure to read. I loved it.

Thank you so much for writing such a lovely, delightful story!

-Austra

Mon foi, c'est tres bon! This is quite impressive! Your word choice, grammar, spelling, and general story line are extremely original and excellently placed! I will continue to read with great pleasure.

-Austra

I'm greatly impressed, dear! This was an excellently written chapter... I cannot wait to read the next!

-Austra

great story. i really enjoy it. very well done.

OOOOOOOO its finished! OO such a good story, I'm glad I decided to read it all that time ago. Sorry I didn't review the past couple of weeks. I was in the process of moving and then no internet! But I got to read them all and it was so heartbreaking when her father died. Unfortunately I wish there was more of her stupid cousin and aunt but they are gone forever now. Very good story. Can't wait to see what other stories you come up with!

Awww(: this story was very sweet and a bit unpreictable, which is good! Please continue writing awesome stories?

SPOT! A FEVER? NOOOOOOO.

Oh well, Kate'll take good care of him, I'm sure :)

I love Zee and the conclusions she jumps to. She's still so young and childish, yet she knows of such mature things.

And now the story is over :(

I quite enjoyed it and I'm sad to see it come to an end, although you pulled it off well and with great skill!

I'd definitely read another story by you!

Aw, they're so cute!

I love that Kate cleaned up Spot's apartment!

And psh, who would ever leave Spot? :P

I knew Kate was going to get a pretty large sum of money, but I definitely didn't forsee her leaving New York!

Go Spot go! Stall herrrrr!

I wish I could update as quickly as you with such quality writing, btw :)