I didn't think this fic would make me cry but here we are.

"You extinguished Blackout"! You are amazing! This is an adorable ficlet! Thank you!

Very sweet! Would love to see Ironhide's POV on this

:3 so cute! x

This is wonderful.

The story is sweet but not overly so.

Your grammar and sentence structure are excellent.

Keep up the good work.

Awwww that's so sweet!

Aw, that was sweet. Loved it!

D'aaawwwwwwww. :sniffs:

Really, that's all I got's to give. _

Are we to assume that Sarah had been warned he was coming?

A friend of mine says that the best advise he was ever given as a father was from one of his teammates- 'it's just like that first jump- you aren't sure you can until you really do it, and then you find out that unless you do something really dumb, you'll do just fine.'

There's only 2 words for this: AAAWWWW and Hilarious! Love how Will was so nervous about meeting his daughter! At least he didn't have to freak out because she started screaming when he picked her up! XD

This was touching

aww. that was sweet in all the right ways.

Aww, adorable! Nice to see the 'human' side of Lennox, so to speak. We see him all tough and gung-ho, but not with his family. You've done a great job with him, Sarah and Annabelle. :D

So very, very, very beautiful.

I loved how you described Wills feeling and nervousness about being a father. And 'Hide was awesome, trying to comfort him in his very unique way.

Very cute. I like Ironhide's initial reaction to Will's stress ("Are you aware of a threat that I am not?"), and Will's fear of what might happen when he first meets Annabelle is so very understandable. Good little gap-filler :)