very cute ending! clever!

I wish for more!

This story was both hot and insightful, a rare combination!

Thought this might be fun, DK if it would be terrible. I am delighted to say it was fun and was solidly within in-character for them both. Surprisingly substantive. Thank you for this unexpected pleasure.

Wow, totally loved this!

Phenomenal! You captured the characters perfectly,a perfect balance of sweetness and sexiness.A job very well done,good continue!

Oh dear lord. I was wondering how that first chapter could possibly be topped, but it was indeed and I enjoyed every single word of it. Bravo. This story is going on the favourites list.

The paragraph that really got me:

"He spanked harder and faster and she had to close her eyes and bite her lips, keeping her mewls of pain in her throat. Her butt and upper thighs were burning and tingling and her face was hot. His hand smacked down over and over, intense and hard and too personal, and she couldn't stop any of it."

Really sent shivers of goodness down my spine!

I'd love to read more of your stories for this fandom! You write these two so well, even in unexpected situations such as this :)

I didn't think it was possible to read something so hilarious and so damn sexy at the same time. This is just so, so good. I think the part that really got me was how scarily in character Jane and Lisbon are, even as Lisbon is smacking Jane's ass with a belt. I can only wish and dream that Lisbon would take him in hand like this in the series (especially in light of the latest episodes).

There are so many good lines in this story, one I like in particular being:

"He chuckled as he went over to the couch and dropped down on it. Then he said, "Ah," and hastily changed to his usual prone position."

Oh Jane.

Good chapter

Very nicely done! It's really difficult writing M stories, especially with the theme you chose, but you pulled it off brilliantly! It was a great read! Hope to read more from you soon.

Oversight in 1st chapter's review-loved Jane having to adjust his position on the couch the day after.

As for the 2nd chapter, Jane is so Jane here. And was he lying in wait trying to get up his courage or just waiting until the perfect time of 1 a.m.? Most likely the latter. Yeah, it would be like him to wait until she's good and asleep to ambush her. Loved the blackmail techniques, too. And your description of the moment he decided on the bedroom was perfect and flirty and hot in its own right.

And Lisbon is still acting like she's oblivious to the weight of what's happening! "Fine. Let's get this over with." And then Jane gets sidetracked by how neat her room is!

More tantalizing bits:

1) His wanting to watch her reflection so he could see her face.

2) That allowing her to watch HIM too.

3) His hand sliding into her panties, then sliding said panties down to her knees

4) Spank. And. Touch.

5) EVERYTHING Jane said after Lisbon mentioned the vodka, and I do mean everything, including the dirty talk to help her along

6) Your description of Lisobn opening up

7) The "deed" and everything they BOTH said after that

The whole thing was just so delicious! Donnamour1969 recommended this story to me, and I'm SO glad she did! And I'm with her-this would make a great series of discipline stories. Creative time-out, groundings or acts of service/contrition (some of these manifesting in a look-but-don't-touch scenario), confessions, lots of possibilities. I'm just sayin'.

Anyway, LOVED this story and am looking forward to more from you! Favoriting this in case you decide to add more and favoriting you so I can read more of your stuff when you publish.

Of course, nothing close to this would ever happen on the show-wrong channel. And I can't imagine it would happen outside of at least a newly established romantic relationship. BUT you kept them so well in voice and in character-I had to laugh (sometimes in shock, but who cares?) through this whole first chapter.

Loved Jane taken by surprise when she started manhandling him - "Hey, you know if you – ow! – Lisbon, try to be rational about – damn!" And the 4-letter word she'd never heard before "when she used both hands to yank down his pants and underwear, [and] something caught on him in front".

And Lisbon had to have been royally pissed (and frustrated). "Shut up and lie still." Also loved the silent "ow" afterwards. I mean, what just happened should have been all kinds of awkward, but Lisbon that's just not registering with Lisbon. So funny!

On to read the next chapter, looking forward to the turnabout.

I'm so glad when I was browsing for Jisbony fics I ran across this one and took the chance of reading it. That first chapter was so absurdly outrageous that I laughed all the way through. I mean, the mental image alone of Lisbon spanking Jane was priceless! And your dialogue is so great and in character and humorous. Well done. Chapter 2 was wonderful too, but imagine my disappointment when I see you've marked this story "complete." You really should continue it. I'm going to subcribe to the story alert on the off chance you do. Thanks for the enjoyable read. Well done!

This was really well-written. Jane, in particular seemed really IC, using his patented combo of observation and intuition to suss out Lisbon's hidden desires.

The bit where he told her he wasn't going to fu** her and talked dirty in an attempt to both relax her and turn her on reminded me of the "I'm not going to hypnotise you,Lisbon"-scene in Red Badge. Good ol' reverse psychology.

Can i see Lisbon as someone who'd like being spanked? Maybe. she does enjoy the physical tackles needed in the field and

i can see her wanting to surrender control to someone determined and bold enough to take it. (Jane).

A great read. Hope u write more fics.

This chapter was even better than the last!

Hey, wow, a full sentence from me. Now you know you did a good job. :)