good story though I can't help but wonder just what is the meaning of Sebastian's second name

Loved it but I withi knew what sebastians 2 names meant

A. You're awesome. B. So's your story. C. So am I. Review of the Year

Really? Lucifer? Not only is that a dead give away, but it's embarrassingly trite.

There is no way Ceil would stay silent after "Lucifer" struck Sebastian for the first time. He would firmly remind him that he is a guest and ask him to mind his manners. To stay silent is to show weakness.

The changing eye colour is a ridiculous, overused, and useless trope. Not only are Sebastian's eyes NOT reddish-brown (they are crimson), try mixing red, brown and grey together and see what you get. Not something very compelling, especially in a dim room.

Demons very clearly from your own description do not obsess over their young as humans do (from what you've written, it seems they prefer to let them struggle on their own for the most part), so Sebastian even considering his mother caring is OOC.

Sebastian is being ridiculously mushy. I understand the desire to idolize those you are attracted to, but even if Sebastian did have this backstory (which isn't bad by the way), he wouldn't be laying it bare so emotionally, ESPECIALLY in front of Ciel.

That line about god being a bigot was funny.

Them getting together at the end was waaaay rushed.

I really really really wanna hurt Sebastian's family right now.

That's sebby's soul!

Eeeeeeeee! HIS TRUE NAME IS CIEL LOVE! HEHEHHEHEHHEHHEHE I LOVE IT!

that. was. incredible. THE BEST kuroshitsuji fanfic i have ever had the pleasure of reading. ill be looking further into your works from here on out- you impress me with your accuracy. accuracy for hitting the right chords in your readers' hearts and minds, that is. the ooc-ness in this fic is more than welcome in my opinion, and creates a certain "oh, so that's what they're really like" feel (even though i know that the actual author of the series did not intend for them to be this way [i would much rather they did, i would probably like the series a great deal more]). thank you for writing this brilliance, now its time to visit you profile. ;)

Lucifer... ugh! What an utter c-u-n-t! I'm so glad I read this. What an original plot. And I just love how Ciel was changed and so they get to be together forever! It was awesome!

hopefully more from this 'universe'? I can think of some events i'd like to read about. This really is very interesting.

Loved it!

LOL~the best aftwerwords ever written...the story too!:p

Aww this has such a sweet ending! I really like this pairing ( ment to be and all)

this was soooo good! I hope it wasn't the end though!

i love this-i am always happy when those 2 became immortal lovers!