| Reviews for A Little Too Late |
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   Catmint chapter 4 . 7/3/2013 Beautiful yet heartbreakingly sad. Fantastic writing; I can just see this scene playing out like that. |
| karli.anne chapter 4 . 10/13/2012 Oh, you made me cry. Not that that is a difficult task, but this story is so sweet and sad and just wonderfully written. Excellent job! |
| thewritingwanderer chapter 4 . 7/20/2012 Aww... it ended so sad! But I still loved it!:) |
| eva-david chapter 4 . 4/7/2012 You know what? I wish it had happened this way and the show had continued at the end of the fourth chapter, not where it did. This is just too sad to express it in words and at the same time I can not help loving it... |
| Anonymous033 chapter 4 . 1/1/2012 Oh my gosh, I love the ending! And I love the entire fic :) there are some parts in which I didn't really agree with the characterization (because Tony was pushing her away a lot at the time) but I loved it overall :D It's very well written; good grammar and fluency. I like the introspection and the descriptions. And I love how Tony's come to realize that despite everything, he IS lucky. ~Soph |
| lost in my design chapter 4 . 11/16/2011 This made me cry. This story is absolute perfection. "When he reached the doorway, he met her eyes and saw so much grief and sadness that, for a moment, he wanted to turn and run; just drop his things and take her hand and run away from everything that had hurt them, from everything that would keep them apart." That is the best line I have read in a really long time. Please, keep writing. Your stories are fantastic. |
| Yeseniadc chapter 4 . 8/8/2011 really enjoyed this story, it was so sweet and I love the fact they actually had a chance to say good where in the real NCIS, didn't happen...thanks for filling in the blanks! |
| AliyahNCIS chapter 4 . 7/23/2011 This was so cute and heartwrenching. Gosh I just want them to be together. Thanks for writing and sharing, so good! :) |
| MegpieLovesTiva chapter 4 . 7/23/2011 awwwwwwww this was soooooo sad, but it was so sweet! I loved it, and it has been a joy reading this story! :) |
| mprmusings chapter 4 . 7/22/2011 thank you for sharing, i like this current chapter a lot. perfect amount of angst and tiva'ness. |
| Tiva fan chapter 4 . 7/22/2011 This was one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read. My heart ached just from reading your description of what they were goin through. Amazing job. |
| NCISLOVE chapter 4 . 7/21/2011 Great story! I loved it! and I will admit I wanted to cry reading the last chapter! It was so well written and it felt real! Wonderful job! |
| sassymariska chapter 4 . 7/21/2011 Really great story. I loved it, great job! :D |
| MegpieLovesTiva chapter 3 . 6/28/2011 I loved this chapter! I loved how they were remembering each other because they could never be together again! But it is sad that the ywont be able to see each other again. :( Well I love this story and this chapter, and I can't wait for the next one! :) |
| Robern chapter 3 . 6/28/2011 I like this story, I can't wait to see where you go with this |
