Good job! I never thought there was enough information in the books about how Lily and Sirius's relationship was. I think you did a wonderful job showing that with this story.

I love the idea of this and Sirius is perfectly written :-)

So gorgeous. I love it! I love the idea that Sirius and Lily eventually became just as close as James and Lily and James and Sirius. I love the idea that Sirius and Lily both consider each other family. Amazing fic!

This was a gem. Loved it, well done!

so this was amazing and i think that you should totally do a story with Lilly and each of the Marauders. I also read The Dinner and it was amazing as well. I love how Vernon reacted when James stood up to his full height and crossed his arms. Priceless :)

This is really wounderful. REALLY. Its sweet and funny and heartbreaking. Your writing is really balanced, not every line is a joke, but the ones that are great and original, and the angst at the end isn't out of place, because there's little bits sprinkled all the way through. I LOVED IT. The ending made me want to scream "They can't die! They just can't!"

This is great! I love Sirius/Lily friendship and now I'm depressed because you don't have other stories...

But thanks for sharing this one. (;

I love this relationship so much! You did such an incredible job with them! I live Lily's words to Sirius at the end!

I've asked Prongs twelve or so times whether or not he wants to back out…

Love Sirius's "muggle-way" of doing things. Great story. I loved it.

This is a very good story.

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It's a role playing site based on the Harry Potter world.

Either way, good luck with your writing and I look forward to reading more.

Annabelle Morrow, SUM student

Really great story, I've always loved the Sirius/Lily friendship and now after reading this I find that my love for them has grown. :)

Keep up the great work.