Reviews for Unexpected Methods of Communication |
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Guest chapter 1 . 4/4/2019 Loved it |
to lazy to sign chapter 1 . 4/13/2015 Loved it. Silent communication is best.- Mydirtylittlesecret |
batsbloodsoup chapter 1 . 6/28/2014 Aw! I loved it! Fantastic work! :D |
DrummerDancer chapter 1 . 6/23/2013 Loved this! |
GreenEyes7 chapter 1 . 8/27/2012 Thanks for posting and sharing this fic. I found it a wonderful character piece on Ed and Roy. This story was also smoking hot. After reading it, I really feel like this is its own little universe; it's nicely contained. Sweet and thoughtful as well. |
rabid kuma chapter 1 . 7/8/2012 This is fantastic! Delightfully dirty and insightful in a very interesting way. |
MangaFreak15 chapter 1 . 5/16/2012 Quiet during sex, actually a nice explanation of it. :) |
Kyrinne chapter 1 . 4/8/2012 Interesting idea. Quite the opposite of most Ed/Roy scenarios. I love that you put both perspectives and kept both in character. Well done! |
Heather chapter 1 . 10/15/2011 This is the first RoyEd fic that hasn't squicked me out, since I'm still new in the fandom and all that. Roy and Ed are my two favourite characters, but I always preferred them not "together"... Until maybe now :) |
comicgrrl chapter 1 . 6/30/2011 Love this. Seeing both their views on communication is wonderful and the way in which you told it couldn't have been better. The visuals are so vivid that I feel like I'm experiencing what they are and feeling the deep emotion paired with it. Nicely done. |
ANIMELOVEDOLL chapter 1 . 6/24/2011 That was sexual technicality! It was really great. :D |
Aimi-chan chapter 1 . 6/22/2011 So, this warranted a review! God, this was some decent FMA fic! I love how you got into both of their heads, and sort of made both of them a little insecure without even realizing the other was insecure as well! Still, I feel a bit bad for Roy, who I first read as Ryou xD, but Roy does get to have sex with the one and only Edward Elric, so he doesn't get to complain. Yay for this! |
MissJudged16 chapter 1 . 6/20/2011 almost forgot to review! That would have been sad :( anyway, great job! Short and to the point. Just a little drabble. Good character descriptions and what not. Lovely lovely work. |
MARYLOVER chapter 1 . 6/15/2011 That was so different from the average oneshots I use to read... a nice surprise. You portrayed their first thoughts about the other so perfectly. If only you could continue with something from some time later, say their thoughts over the other after months or a year later. Lovely reading. Thank you. Bye |
BlackWolf2Dragoon chapter 1 . 6/15/2011 This really surprised me! I knew I was going to be caught off guard by the summary you gave, because I don't think anyone had really considered this actuality, that Edward might actually be able to be quiet in some situations. It takes really great detail and really thoughtful words and descriptions galore to make a story without speech stand out. You've done just that! You've given us the chance and experience to see through both their points of views about each other and what they're thinking and considering, even planning, behind each other and about each other. You go to the big stuff, with a surprise that Roy is louder than Edward himself, to the tiny stuff like Ed finding out that Mustang isn't ticklish, but in fact gets turned on by what others would find a ticklish. That's what I love about this, it's just so surprising and smart! An absolute joy to read! ~Blackie |