God, some of these lines were so damn perfect!

"but she has loved Sasuke for even longer than she has loved her village, and she just knows that he can see the hesitancy in her steps, the trouble in her eyes – he is a sin that she cannot find the strength to quit, or the luxury to indulge in"

and

"suddenly, she is 12 years old and vulnerable again. For she may have gotten betterfasterstrongersmarter but she is still Sakura, and he is still Sasuke, and he will forevermore be her Achilles heel."

I think these lines describe Sakura really good, I loved that! :)

i love this! really icely done!

I thought it was very deep. Great job!

This is great! Very succinct but still meaningful. I love the way you show Sakura's thought process.