very nice, I love it! :)

Not bad at all! I would very much welcome any VD stories in the future! Especially about Stefan/Damon brotherly relationship.

;-)

Your last line really got to me. That was brilliant.

Aww, I thought that was really sweet.

Very nice! A good foray into why Stefan always hopes for his brother. Yes, you should write some more for this fandom!

Really loved this.I'm one of few fans who view the series as a love story about the two brothers and their struggle to get along together. Great job:-)

wow. that's actually so true how everyone will just die eventually, and i loved the last you please do an epilogue or something?

Wow, really REALLY love your view of this. And you wrote it so wonderfully too. I am big on the brotherly love between these two.

One thing that I would love to see is something that branches off of this. Maybe a story based way into the future where it's just the two of them again. Maybe they are back to tormenting each other, or maybe they have found a sence of peace, reclaiming the bond they had before Katherine. Whatever floats your boat I would love to read.

the last sentence a shiver ran down my spine.

wow love it! so true in the case of the brothers, elena and the others(not including caroline) will move on or die, but his brother is forever. Like your way of thinking you should continue if you have any ideas or even want to. No biggy if you dont its still good!:)

Great job hun! you're obviously very talented.

I have a request.. maybe, if u have time, you can write a Damon/stefan brotherly story? You know, one when they're actually having a sweet, brotherly interaction or something? Cause we dont get any hugs between them in the show which really pisses me off :P

But if u cant, its ok ;D

great job anyway! :D