I adore your Persephone! She’s got spunk and yet you perfectly captured how new live drives even the strongest woman crazy let alone a girl getting her first taste of it.

Make A Sequel

You know? My mother tongue is spanish and even I know the difference between your and youre.

Both your retellings are amazing. Is there any chance, any chance at all that you are still going to write the Hera/Zeus fic? Please? Please? There are only a few stories about them (good ones even fewer) and I really like your take on their relationship, at least what I've seen of it.

Wow, what an awesome and complex story. Hands down one of the best Hades/Persephone stories I’ve read.

Ok. I read this whole thing in one sitting. It was that good. I couldn’t put it down and I stayed up till after 2... I have to get up at 530 and I still couldn’t put it down knowing how tired I was going to be.

Love this!

BEST. RETELLING. OF. HADES. AND. PERSEPHONE. EVER. 3

I still can't wait for your take one zeus and hera

Ok, I'm going to be brutally honest here. I hated Hades here, and I hated Persephone for falling in love with Hades, who had way too many past relationships with others for me to be real happy with his character. I felt like he did NOT deserve Persephone at all. I don't know if that was the point, but she was way too good for him. He should have fought more and better for her! I mean, she even accepted his daughter! And invited one of his past flings to come in visit. What did he do to deserve it?
And that ending! She isn't going to die, like his past love Leuce right?
That would be so cruel.
But,
it's so frigging addicting this story. I stayed up just to finish it, not being able to go to bed, until I finished this! For some reason despite, really hating the characters sometimes, I really liked this story. It was written interesting and addictive. U have a knack for writing, and I am not sure I'm happy saying that.
But, I'll be checking out your other stories.
Sincerely,
begrudging fan accepting defeat.

Still one of my most favorite Hades and Persephone stories! I just read it all the way through again probably for the 4th or 5th time!

Great story! I have clicked favorite story! It would be awesome to see a sequel that picks up right after this plot line. Thanks for sharing this story with us!

I absolutely love this story! It's just beyond perfect.

thank you for the story ... it was lovely

oh my gods you need to write an eplogue like thing to this last dialougue betwwen persphone and hades