So sad

Damn, son! This fanfic left me breathless - quite literally! Charmingly seductive Alois is my favorite when it comes to Alois x Lizzy fanfics, though I gotta say, this is so intense and I love the way you describe Lizzy's inner confusion on whether or not to admit to herself that she liked whatever Alois was doing to her lower body. And how hard it was for her to comprehend what in the world was happening, since she is an inexperienced cinnamon bun. Poor Lizzy. All she wanted was to find her fiancé, instead she collided with the Devil's spawn. Anyway, I rate this 10/10. Awesome job and writing skills. :)

Unrealitic.. Alois is not capable of overpowering Lizze..

It would been more Realistic if He ended up Seducing her into having Sex with him.. Like What Sebastian Convinced Beast to have sex with him... And Lizze feeling Shame for giving in to Alois's Seduction.

Honestly this One Shot is Basically Impossible and unrealistic.

Lame and pic.

Alois Wish he could Man handle her...

You need to be more realistic and update about the Series.

Lizze is a Capable Fighter that could easily kill All is.. Who is a Normal Human..

Even Sebastian made a Compliant on how much of a Capable Fighter and Sword Fighter she is. Lol.

So this Scenario.. Is laughble

If Alois tries to pull that stunt off of they are both Alone then he would be in a Nasty Surprise that would Probably cost him his Life.

This is horrid...and amazing...Y U DO DIS!?

Omg Alois is such a bastard. I would love to hear more of ciels reaction.

I hate that that cut off. I was trying to say that the concept of this story reminds me of that scene in Cruel Intentions between Sebastian and Cecilia. That scene was also really messed up, so kudos on portraying the twisted and horrible, which is 99% of this series anyway!

This reminds

Kinda rapey, don't you think? It'd be cool if you did a follow up where Lizzy gets revenge on Alois for that shït. You know she's pretty badass in the manga, so perhaps you could incorporate her badassery in a revenge chapter, because what Alois did was technically sexual assault. I'm envisioning chains, whips, sharp objects and plenty of hatred with which to wield these tools.

Get busy.

OH MY GAAAAWD!
You have to continue! What will Ciel do him?
AAAAH I JUST CAN'T!
Please update soon:D

Holy hell, this was twisty and perfect. Absolutely freaking perfect. It was believable, I applaud you for that. Great story! Thanks for sharing!

OMG! OMG! OMG! T-T

Alois evil and perverted! How dare he do that to Lizzy!? Although ... Whom do delusion? I love the "Alois x Lizzy" ... but ... it's sad that this kind of winged happen in reality, with many girls T - T

I really wish it was just a dream ... T-T

SEE YOU LATER!

That's so freaking sad! D:
I wonder if it's like that for all girls.. if it is,... that's just REALLY sad.
Poor Lizzy. For her, I hope it was just a dream.
But good story though. ;)

Aw poor Lizzy, KILL ALOIS FOR SURE!

Yes, I pity Lizzie a little bit, but I think I worth that)) Love Alois and the story much, it's great!