SO CUTE

One of my fav jaylee fics

LOVED LOVED LOVED it! I think this could stretch on for a few more chapters! ;)

How did I not have this on story alert? Bad me! Thank you for continuing. I'd love to have some more of these two!

I started off disappointing that you didn't include Mal and Zoe in the "fluff" part of your story. But after reading it,I discovered that you made the right call. It came out much better your way. I think that you did a fantastic with not only them,but Jayne and Kaylee.

I was also a bit iffy about the interactions between Kaylee and Zoe. But upon looking back at the series and the BDM,I could see where you can have a little wiggle room concerning them. So I'll just right it off as artistic license on your part. Good job overall and keep it up.

Oh please continue I'd love to read more of this it's terrific.

I would really love to read more! You've got some great subplots with the Mal/Zoe storyline and whatever Inara is up too. I am also LOVING the way you're writing Jayne & Kaylee. I'm going to add this to my alert list in hopes you'll update!

I sure hope you come back to this story line. I got a good sense of this world, and the voices were captured nicely. Does leave me wondering what's going on in Zoe and Mal's room...

The picture of Zoe and Jayne looking at each other's knives all night was great.

This is what I look for in fanfic :-)

More, more. Just in case I wasn't clear, yes, more of this please. ;)

Aw, so sweet, and so true to the characters. A wonderful story and great ending, but I'll still be greedy and ask for more, please?

Noes! Must has more!