Reviews for The Last Patrol: Make a Wish
Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2018
To cute for words!
RascalJoy chapter 1 . 12/19/2015
Aaaaaawwwwwww! I'm not sure whether to coo or cry my eyes out DX
Their relationship in the reboot sucks (except for their brief reunion in Grayson #12) and I miss their bro fluff so much.
Thank you fo this. It was beautiful.
moonshadow2012 chapter 1 . 2/18/2015
Oh, this is so emotional. I love these two so much! And you writing just makes me want to cry and scream at DC for what they did.
Little Bird chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
AWWHH! ;-;
Teaarss omg I can't.
Robyn S. Mockingbird chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
Totally understandable. That last line, though...I'm not sure saccharine covers it. Seriously. Melted into a puddle of fangirl-goo.
StellaCartoonlover chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
do you have a dami pov as well? I wanna know what he wished for and if it is what I think it is...
frangipani blossom chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
Gosh, this is sooo heartbreaking :'(
I love Dick and Damian as Batman and Robin... why couldn't they stay together? *pout*
Yoko-Kiryuu Bikutoria Kurama chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Awe Dick really would make a good father if given the chance
Dextra2 chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
Tgis is really good! Will you write more?
TheWordCreatorOriginator chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
Awwww, this was so heartbreaking-ly prescious!

"Damian's small hand closes around his and grips tightly.

Dick has to take a steadying breath to regain his composure, and his wish echoes once more in his head.

Please don't make me let this child go; don't make me say goodbye."

These lines melt my heart everytime I read! Great one-shot!
Kirrae chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
That was just... I don't know if I can say anything that will accurately convey how... harrowing this is, but I think my metaphysical heart has just been torn to pieces and scattered to the winds.

- Kirrae
Ellie chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
"Please don't make me let this child go; don't make me say goodbye."

That one line seriously brings tears to my eyes every time I read it *sniffles* Anyways, great job!
sarilleny chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
That was really sweet. Very well written. I hope they do get to stay together in some capacity. :(
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
AW! *U* *U* This is the sweetest thing ever! *U* *U* Rock on! I LOVE this! *U* *U* Rock on! Absolutely gorgeous! *U* Rock on! Geez, I am SO WITH YOU on the Reboot! This has got to be the stupidest thing DC's EVER done, and I just... God, they're ruining one of the greatest things they've ever had! T.T Rock on! This nearly makes me cry - and that is NO easy feat! *U* Rock on!
BanannaSlapz517 chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
Just to say, I've read a bunch of your stories (mostly just the Batman stuff - I love how you pull of Dick and Damiam) and this one is my favorite. Emotionally, I think you captured it perfectly. Writing in the present tense can sometimes be risky, but this was great. I'm a fan of this rhyme, too. Can't wait for more!
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