That was great. Hope to see a sequel/chapters! You captured the characters hearts in your storytelling, and it was hot as cayenne!

Good story overall. Like the tension of Keiichi's self-doubt and how each goddess tries to console and help him overcome. I know it's probably unlikely, but I'd like to see a follow-up to this story...possibly with a semi-harem vibe to it including Peorth and Lind in the mix. If you ever get the inspiration for it, I think you could pull it off.

Awesome story

It's always a joy to reread this.

this story is filled with vanilla i think i got diabetes... i somehow thankful you skip the H scene...

Ha! This was great! Kei finally gets to be with Bell!

That was hilarious. I think the funniest part to me was when Beldandy messed up several systems from rather being to powerful or her lover being that damn good. XD

I like it. Good job.

Minor nitpick:
"Ordinance" refers to a piece of legislation.

"Ordnance" is artillery and bombs. I'm in the military, trust me on this one.

Skuld is frequently laden with ordnance, not ordinances.

Seriously, the best one shot I've seen so far on the site. Well done, well done.

This is totally how the manga should end. ;)

I loved this. Both funny and also serious at times when you talk about Keiichi's situation. Definitely worth reading.

Simply Awesome and Hilarious!
during "that" month it must of been stormy skies 24/7 XD

Love these characters from the first episode I watch great oneshot

Nice and funny story. Thank you!

Great story. I hope you add more to it.

Love this story. Excellent work.