Reviews for Life as big daddy L24 |
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![]() ![]() I read the first story you wrote and liked it, this one was also good, it felt like there was more detail too, please think about starting up this story again |
![]() ![]() ...awsome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great work, please continue soon . |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update when you get a chance this is awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the rewite can't wait for more |
![]() ![]() It's a good story man but your grammar is shit and you need to work on it...yes I'm a grammar nazi |
![]() ![]() yay more l24 finally lol im very glad to see this up and hope it will be as good as life as a big daddy which juding by first chap it will be happy writing |