Just letting you know, Fanfiction must have a thing with brackets because I can't see the thoughts (both the example and where a "she thought" was). Could you do something like?

good story but why wasnt it finished

How is chapter 4 even possible? Angelus and Drusila are vampires. That means they would both smell and hear Buffy. Smelling could maybe be explained away, but enhanced hearing makes this chapter impossible. Buffy can hear them. They must be able to hear her heartbeat. And they realize they are looking for a "who". This is lazy writing. Deal with the implications of the universe you are writing in. Up to this point I was enjoying the story but this is just insulting. Are the readers expected to be dumb to enjoy this? Who can suspend their logic to such an extent? Not going to read further. If that's chapter 4, I can only imagine what convenient shortcuts will show up later.
You can clearly write better. Don't let yourself settle for writing on this level.

I'm looking forward to reading this again - love the start and the ending alternative reality/timeline.

The Glory bit is a giant plot hole since killing her in the original timeline would have made it unnecessary to kill her in the second according to Willow. The other problem is how anyone could trust Willow to get anything right. She screwed up the first spell, tried a second to fix the first, but screwed up so Tara trusts her to get the third right?

Buffy apparently is a complete idiot. She is letting Angelus beat the crap out of Spike to "preserve the timeline" while admitting to changing it by interfering with Spike's. Also, she is complaining about her crappy life and how she's back at the worst year of it, but plans to do nothing to change it while too stupid to realize she already has.

OMG! why did I think this was complete... at least it's to the point where it was close enough

Wow. Beautifully written. You are a genius.

good story.

this is so very much worth re-reading. I'm so glad I found it again.

Blue

i got so teary eyed when spike told her she had to go but im happy that some part of them remember. in my mind they would end up running into Hugh again and find out what is the truth, force riley to have the chip removed, they save her mother and all is well. lol

Thank you for posting I enjoy reading this
-Spec!al

This was a very sweet story. Thank you. :)

I love Brownie! (I know his name is Hugh) I've seen a 'brownie' demon before... did you make them up or are they in some literature?

i kind of hate Willow at this point.