Reviews for Your Guardian Soul |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! |
![]() ![]() It is pretty good nice job |
![]() ![]() ![]() That end XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome well written story! I can't wait to read the rst of your work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG this is great! And I was listening to a song called Speak Up by Pop ETC and it went with the love scene perfectly! Anyway, your writing is amazing! :) |
![]() ![]() The ending was so romantic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Let me start by saying that I love that you're so detailed in your story writing and your footnotes. I really thought the lemon part was good; however, that's the problem. It was too good. Considering it was Maka(and Soul's maybe?) first time, I really thought it went too smoothly. Love the ending though. |
![]() ![]() I love this fanfic. You should absolutely make another story that branches off of this story... Can't wait to read it.p.s... The lemon had a great female point of view. |
![]() ![]() I loved your use if the song Your Guardian Angel by Red Jumpsuit Apparatus I think it fits them perfectly! I love soulxmaka and I think you made a great rendering of the pair. I am so glad I stumbled across your fanfic it was amazing! Thank you so muh for writing this, please continue writing more I love your artistic ability and your skillful use if quotes and songs. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can honestly say that was the best lemon I have ever read. XD nice |
![]() ![]() Wow, i have to say that was fantastic. The way you shifted from the action to the romance, to black*star being himself. I definitely think you should make a story like to ones you have discussed. I am a writer (sort of) and i love reading good stories. Keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved it was gr8 awesome and terrific |
![]() ![]() Damn that was good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() First greatjob and second an artist is there own worstcritic this coming from a artist who dreams of being famous I may not write but i can draw third your lemon scent was damn near perfect but its not perfect the only way to be perfect is if you're all in all i give this story 4.9 out of 5 |