I hope so! I could always resort to threats of "else" again. Poor Tony! But he's so awesome in this chapter.

I'm weirded out.

Aw, I wish Gibbs hadn't had to blame Jenny. But that's okay, because he couldn't have Jeanne blaming Tony! Heeheehee I'm glad Gibbs is okay. :P Poor Tony, someone needs to come up with a plan. The universe really seems to have it in for Tony in this story, doesn't it?

interesting storyline, i like where its headed

At first I wasn't so sure about this electus thing but now I love it. Gibbs better be okay! Or...or...or ELSE. I'm excited for the angst. I like angsty stories. Keep up the good work! I hope the next chapter is up soon.

I actually really love this! and I love how these characters interact and the different relationships that are within the same relationhip!

I really hope you keep developing the character development as well as the plot!

Also I'd love to maybe see something happe to Ziva? as I love her badassery but I think that inside our men are really old fashioned gentlemen (sort of like when Kate dies and Ducky has his speech to gibbs about only being equal in death?) And i'd like to see where that goes(though i must admit i feed on angst)

GOOD JOB

I'm in shock this is so not my type of story ...but now I'm intrigued and have to know what happens...does Abby know ? any one else besides Fornell or does really know whats going on? are you gonna give more back story as we try to find out why Gibbs left? don't answer!...these are just some of the things I hope you address in the story! til next time

what about abs doesn't she get to have any fun?

When you said all four were in a relationship, I was intrigued. I don't really know what I was expecting, but I really love this. It's also a fantastic story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

wow, this is extremley different and a brilliant fresh plot and totally not what I would have thought to expect.

That being said however it totally caught my attention and I found I was unable to skip past it and read something else. This is typically not my sort of story, I love the whole fluff and sweetness of Tiva on here but I have to say I thoriughly enjoyed this fic and am quite abxious to see where this is heading!

PLease update soon!

Much love xxx

Ok...ummm I'm kind of speechless. I'm not use to fanfictions like this so it's kind of weird to me, but with that said it caught my attention and I would like to read more it's really interesting and well written. Good job! :)

This was a little weird for me I'm confused about what's going on it seems like a giant NVID orgy minus Abby and why is Ziva so upset