I found this story two days ago and I just finished it. First of all, thank you for writing it and continuing with an alternative ending. While the sad ending seemed more fitting for the story, it devastated me. I was glad to see that you had explored another direction, even if you lost your interest in it later. I enjoyed this story a lot, I love the Bella you created. It might be OOC to some people, but I believe the Bellatrix Lestrange we got from the books and movies was very superficially explained. Possible due to the fact that there wasn't much information about her life before Voldemort and Azkaban. I just believe every person is complex and cannot simply be either good or evil. That goes even for Voldemort. I also believe that everyone deserves redemption, if they truly want it and are willing to put effort.

It hasn't been updated in almost two years but I can only hope one day you'll find the inspiration to continue and find a way to finish it the way that it feels like it should be to you. I also hope that you'll consider writing other stories in the future. I know I would love to read anything you write.

I was so surprised to receive the email that tyou had updated, and very taken aback cuz I simply did not expectbthat and marked this story as abandoned in my head.

I still followed it because it was the first ever story I ever read after officialy shipping Bellamione and finding fics, and I fell in love with it. I must say I’m very sad to see the Author’s Note but you have the last word. Thannk you for being my first and hopefully we get to see you soon around writing something else. Bellamione or not.

OMG please continue this!

So many feelings in this story. You have an amazing talent for having emotions show in your writing. I am glad you decided to write an alternate ending, the original ending, as good as it was, was heartbreaking, and also didn't fit well with her writing the story down as is implied in the first chapter. I hope you update soon, this story is beautiful.

Ok I don’t usually write long reviews but here we go. HOLY SHT MAN I LOVE THIS. I ALMOST CRIED. MY THROAT FELT TIGHT. I HYPERVENTILATED. IM SCREAMING. I LOVE THIS. I DONT USUALLY LIKE FIRST OERSON BUT WOW. I VANT WAIT FOR MORE. W O W

will you continue? even though i dont enjoy 1st person of view it is great story olease keep going

I would love to read this but god damm the point of veiw is awful to read

You need to settle on a perspective from which this story is seen. Reading a story with 2 different perspectives (Bellatrix's 2nd person and Hermiome's 1st person) is jarring. It's just plain awkward to read.

no...No!...NO!

Well shit...

Hermione is a complete dumpster fire.

Everything is not as it seems... I'm as lost as Hermione... Thank you for writing x

Just finished reading this, wow! Wonderful writing, looking forward to the next update X

Ah no why is Bella like this ? the whole fic is so amazing and makes me feel so happy and now I feel bad for Bella because she couldn't talk to Hermione :(

Interesting Chapter! Looking forward to reading the next!