it took me years to finish reading this story (i really dont like bleach and its crappy spanish) and you almost made me quit the last chapters. another bittersweet ending wasnt going to cut it. but man it was an awesome journey, dont know if you will ever read this, after all almost 5 years since the last chapter. but you are a great writer and i hope you make somr awesome stuff.

I was fairly disappointed with how asunder ended and I think that carried over because I find I don’t really have the patience to give your story a chance. Since it didn’t start off very well and hasn’t really grabbed me I’m gonna have to pass

asunder was better than this shit.

Great job

I would have enjoyed this story more if Nel had permanently returned to her adult form. Why in Gods name did Naruto ask Orihime to take Nel out of her healing field in Chapter 2 once he visibly saw her being healed and growing stronger? Didn't want to lose out on raising a cutesy daughter? A playmate for Yachiru and a playmate for Mayuri? I feel disappointed and ripped off. Ah well you don't seem to be writing stories anymore so what does it matter? Enjoy your life.

Great story

"Super fusion Nelmehada," lol! Again, Nel is my favorite character here, because she's funny and super-adorable. Also, Ichigo joining in with Lee was funny, but I hope it's a one-time gag and not something he's going to do now.

...What.

Naruto tries to be reasonable like a character instead of a walking shounen stereotype, and Kurama says, "No! Stop acting logically! Believe in your plot armor!" and gives a speech that would be corny from a good guy, let alone Kurama before his heel-face turn? Canon made the change at least a little gradual instead of instant like that.

Before that happened, I liked that you let some people die and treated the villains like threats. You're throwing Naruto's character development out the window with this, "ignore reason and be more ultra-shounen" speech.

"...and I would have died without pants," lol! Your writing of Nel has been great.

Haha, how many things are crossed over here? Is Kyo from something, too, or is D. Gray Man the only other one?

That's a powerful naruto fic. I like it even though just read but stories continuously.
Thanks

one minor mistake you put Nagato as having Black hair but he's an Uzumaki and has Red Hair and if for some reason his soul is now taking on the image of the body he transplanted his soul into then Yahiko has Orange hair

hmm so far up to this point it's a good story but i'm slightly confused on something here. If Karin and Jugo passed over into Soul Society then how is it that Jiraiya and Tsunade haven't shown up yet as Karin and Jugo both died before them and I doubt that either of them had as much chakra as Jiraiya or Tsunade

Oh God here we go explaining to your enemy what your technique is and does typical

And i thought this was only a naruto and bleach crossover geez