Aw, that's sweet. Loki's being nice, or as nice as Loki CAN be. :)

Oh that sneaky Loki! So frickin' sexy! lol :)

Love this. :)
Not sure if you know about the new pairing feature, but you should consider marking this as a pairing between Loki and Jane so that people looking for fics with a pairing like that will find your story to read. :)

I don't know much about psycology, but I think in Thor, and definitly in the Avengers, he is a sociopath. His lack of empathy is disturbing. He had those guards and any men, somen of children thst got in the way killed whrn he let innthe frost giants(twice). He risked his mother's life as well. Tried to kill Thor, his friends, the town, Jotunheim. I would call him evil.

So often, I find he's written too soft and the stories are unentertaining. This is not one of those stories. You really had me worried after the AN, but this was a realistic story(from my interpretation).

Oooooh... interesting

I envy your writing. Brilliant x

I think you wrote Loki wonderful here. Kind of mad, kind of jealous.. The whole way hes behaving here!

"Yes, he would allow the golden guardian to see him today. He wanted his brother to know exactly what he was up to. Who knew? Maybe if he listened close enough, he could hear Thor's barbaric scream as it travelled throughout the realms."

Yeah, because he would totally enjoy that.

"No, he was not yet certain that he wanted to kill the girl. Right now, he was simply enjoying the knowledge that somewhere in Asgaard, Thor worried and fretted over whether or not he did want her dead."

And this. Oh god, thats brilliant. Because I really think he would have thought like that.

How Loki is confused for a moment but doesnt pull away instantly. Wow. :) Or how he talks to her even though he didnt want to.

""No, Loki." His eyes widened, threatened to pop from their sockets at the sound of his name from her lips. A wave of anger suddenly rushed through him when he recognized the words that had, not too long ago, come from his father's lips as well."

Oh god, and I loved this.

"He frowned slightly when his skin tone darkened and he realized he was using a skill he had been born with, and not taught….."

Aww, and of course this part.. and the end! Great, you really wrote that good!

Great story, I like how you make each character remain their same personality as in the movie.

I agree with you, definately took me a while to notice Loki, something about him really captures my attention.

I like the interaction in the story, and I wish to see more writings of yours!

I read it, re-read it, and yep, I sure as hell took it as Loki/Jane! Nice piece.

It's nice how you write Loki, very much in character. I think he's more a troubled jealous younger son than a villain, at least in the movie verse.

A promise for so much more with that ending, ohyes! I think this shows just the kind of plotting and scheming that can go on in his brain.

Interesting! I like how Loki unintentionally healed her. I don't think you're the only one who is curious about and very intrigued y Loki - I felt the same way!

Nice fic. :)

nice

I liked it! I'm not a shipper of Jane/Loki, but I do think they could-should-be friends! Glad to see a softer-sided, somewhat not-so-well-intentioned, somewhat-merciful Loki. :)

Hello, my dear. :D Oooh, how interesting! You show a confident, angry, mischievous Loki here-yet you still manage to make him vulnerable, sensitive, and percepetive, as he truly is.

I'm going to post a link to this story on Stolen Relic so other people can read it. :)