Reviews for Man Unfathomable
Wynni chapter 7 . 7/20
i think we should campaign to bring cunny back into common use. It's a nice, fun sounding word.
Wynni chapter 3 . 7/20
Oh my stars and garters, this is GREAT

Jason Isaacs beside himself XD

and yes, you wrote it well. and yes, this could only have gone one of two ways. Hate each other on sight, or get on like a house on fire.

I'm so glad to see these men at home with themselves enough they like each other. Naturally.
Wynni chapter 2 . 7/20
split my infinitives. Love it.
Glorificus26 chapter 11 . 7/11
Ohhh myyyy you know how to play with my emotions!
Glorificus26 chapter 3 . 7/10
I’m loving it so far. I feel like they are all on point personality wise and I love Lucius’ and hooks first interaction. On with the story!
Goldenbassets chapter 15 . 6/28
I cried! Tears, ugly crying, omg. That goodbye kicked my ass.

Well done. You hooked me, (ha get it?), into my first ever crossover and I loved it.
Goldenbassets chapter 14 . 6/28
Well, if you have to say goodbye, have to have one last night-this is the way to do it. Hot damn!
Goldenbassets chapter 13 . 6/28
So very good! I didn’t want Hook to leave but I am not sad to see her finally with Lucius. I like the idea of Hook being the catalyst to being Hermione and Lucius together. His being there was to bring them together. Open their eyes. In a sexy and powerful, Manly way.
Goldenbassets chapter 12 . 6/27
Oh wow what an emotional roller coaster! The duel between the men was stunning! And finally a breakthrough with Lucius and Hermione!
Goldenbassets chapter 11 . 6/27
Sad face. Very well written.
Goldenbassets chapter 10 . 6/27
Lucius and Hermione are getting closer! Yet neither willing to admit anything and it’s so filled with UST it’s amazing. Then seeking out Hook after Lucius runs to relieve that tension, whew! What a useful tool indeed!
Goldenbassets chapter 9 . 6/27
Nooo! As much as I’m looking forward to seeing Hermione and Lucius storyline work it’s way through, I’m not ready for Hook to disappear yet. I’ve loved this!
Goldenbassets chapter 8 . 6/27
Oooh game on, is it? Hook baiting Malfoy had me squealing!

Hook is indeed naughty and I love it! The naughtier the better I say
Goldenbassets chapter 7 . 6/27
Damn. That was amazing. Wow. I’m going to need a shower to cool off now. Incredibly great way to get Hermione to relax and forget the bad evening;)
Goldenbassets chapter 6 . 6/27
Fantastic argument with Lucius and Hermione! All that UST just flying around! Phew! The air is positively lobbing big balls of UST everywhere! And Hook dueling with the dummy sounds stunningly hottt! So disappointed Pascoe interrupted them. Very suspicious timing I’d say...

Having so much fun with this fic! Thank you!
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