Reviews for We Could've Had It All |
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![]() ![]() This was a wonderful Story! Love your Loki and Scarlet, thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() love the ending line. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have never felt so emotional reading a fanfiction or any material than reading that. I am seriously in tears. That hit me in the heart dude. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I kinda wished u wrote the reaction of Odin meeting his grandson for the first time |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing detail :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Completely loved the story! If you ever write more I'd be thrilled :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoy this whole series that your written. But, my gosh, throughout these chapters there's this one word that you misspell all the time that right now it finally snaps me xD. That word "thorn" is a thorn on a rose. But the word your trying to spell is "throne". |
![]() ![]() Great story! Love it |
![]() ![]() I love this story as well as the first one. You do a fantastic job of writing these fan figs. Your work it astonishing. The only thing is ( I know your busy from the things before each chapter) you should read it over once or twice before possting. Sorry for that downer. Other than that it was fantastic. You do so well capturing the feel of how things would go if it were to really happen. I love your stories. I think you should do one with a blonde haired and blue/grey eyed girl and name her Courtney. Just a suggestion. Secretly hoping you take it. Hehe;) |
![]() ![]() Omg I would have never thought of th fact that he wanted to touch her stomach. That was a great idea. I wonder what was going on in loki's head. I want to know so bad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, the whole story was wonderful! it had my heart LITERALLY pounding throughout the entire story...well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! What a conclusion! I am slightly sad, however, since there won't be any new chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing, loved it all. I was a little unsure with their being a kid and stuff but honestly you worked it amazingly. It's just sad we'll never get to see her mother's reaction to Loki ;D lol. But yeah, it was great! I'm off to brows your other fictions now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now THAT'S a way to start a story! -sick mind explodes everywhere- I was going to wait to the last chapter to review, but dang girl! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another fantastic fanfic, with a brilliant plot! |