Awesome job, as usual! ; I'm sorry if this review sucks, but I haven't gotten much sleep in almost two weeks...T.T...it's hard to get to sleep at night...although, I'm not helping myself, answering emails this late...
I think I already told you what I liked about it though...did I? (T.T I'm sorry!)

I can't believe it. Bug and Bobby are there. I hope to help. I hope they save Jackie in time. I wonder if Bug still likes or even loves Ellie ( still) Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon! :)

Wow, great story! I haven't gotten very far yet but I enjoyed this chapter very much. Jason seems very uncomfortable with the whole "sister" concept, and I don't blame him. This is very well done, great work

Bandi-cute

Derp derp derp!

I mean, dun dun dun!

DERP!

Sorry, I feel very derpy now that I don't know if Jackie is going to be okay...

Awesome chapter. I can't belive Sagacity is dead. :(. He would always help Zevo-3 when he needed it. Poor Jason. Poor Jakie. Everthing is so dangerous for them now. People are eveb getting killed. Anyway great job. Update soon. :)

More more! Love how the last few chapters are rated M!

I'M SORRY! I know I didn't review! I'm terrible!

Nice job! I really think you did a good job! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Rain:...that's it?

Dylexa: What do you mean?

Rain:...that was a terrible review, Dylexa. Chihuahua deserves better.

Dylexa: T.T I don't know what to say. I've already told her what I liked in our emails...

Rain: Dylexa!

Dylexa: What?

Rain: YOU'RE UNBELIEVABLE!

...this is why I would make a terrible critique. I crave reviews that tell me why I did good, but I have no idea how to write them...T.T But nice job!

It's rocky I got an account. Yay! Anyway what Ellie's mother said wasn't what I thought it was going to be. Ellie must get tired of being scared all the time. Please try to update SOONER! BTW What about Matt and Lexi ( I think that's her name it's been a while since I've seen her name)

"When I was your age, I didn't even know the name of my own…uh, body part" LMFAO!

Why does everyone think they're going to have sex?

Are they going to have sex?

Another good chapter as always! That's sooo sad. I wonder what Ellie's mom is talking about. PLEASE UPDATE SOON I want to know what happens next. BTW it's been like 3 weeks since you have updated.

Hey! Sorry it took me a while to review! Sadly, as I said before, my computer time has been limited on the week days. *sniffs* Not that I care...I mean, I don't have much time to go on anyways when I'm at my mom's house...*sniffels*

Rain: Just get on with it. Useless chatter doesn't belong on a review. Especially with someone as special as Chihuahua.

Dylexa: ; Right, sorry. Anyways, awesome job! At this point, I have no idea what's going to happen! Scared!

Rain: *rolls eyes*

WOW! I can't believe that. I actually thought Jason would get mad, bit he kept his cool anyway Please UPDATE SOON.

Awesome job, kiddo! Keep up the good work! I hope J and E will be okay!...*giggles*...J and E...

Really good chapter. I loved it. Please update sooner! I wanna know what happens next. Keep writing!

I hope I'm the first one to review!

Rain: I think you are.

Dylexa: YAY!

Rain: -_-'

Dylexa: Alrighty, first of all, awesome job! It was really fun reading it! I really hope Jason won't be too mad at Ellie!

Rain: I hope that Jackie can have candy!

Dylexa:...

Rain: What? I wanted to lighten the mood. I'm sure all the characters in the story are really stressed out right now.

Dylexa: True! Anyways, hope ya update soon!