This is what I imagine for Thor and Jane... Their chemistry was too hot for me to see them ending... Awesome story... It gave me hope for a future for them together

dang, son. you should definitely write more lemons like this! the one-shot is strong with this one

I guess he's pickin up what she's puttin down, eh?

Really really good

Loved seeing Thor driven by lust and completely captivated by Jane! The final chapter was incredibly hot and a fitting conclusion to all the teasing. Well done! :)

I noticed the pattern and squeed when I anticipated "Touch."
I was thrown off here! I thought it was going to be primal but sweet on the bed.
NOPE! Right there on the wall-that's hot.
I thought they'd finish front to front-
NOPE! Turn 'er around!-that's hot.
Great finish!
Literally hahah!

"But he understood now that the fact that he loved her was what brought him to this edge. And the fact that he knew she loved him back was what pushed him over it."
One of my favorite lines from this piece.

I really like the simpleness that he absentmindedly licked his lips but tasted her essence on his lips. That was just...simple but divine.

Everyone just /assumes/ Jane's completely absorbed with science, but physiology falls under that category ;)

It's Tony Stark. You saw what he did to the Avengers movie posters XD

Wow! Loved it.

Holy Hell that had to be one of the hottest stories I've ever read! It shocks me there aren't more of these stories. You did a really fantastic job I was impressed. I will definitely favorite this.

Loved it!

Sooo cute. I love Thor. He is so awesome. Great job!

I love seeing Thor coming to understand his feelings. Humorous and hot!

Very nice... :D I love the build up of lust and the explosion of it. Yowza! ;) I'm looking forward to more.