this was so cute!

Great job! I loved the characterization of the character—most notably, Wheatley’s. This was a great story with an idea that really set itself up for that well delivered last few paragraphs. It was cute, wonderful, and it could have happened in canon. :)

Great job and have a wonderful day!

THIS WAS ADORABLE. I am LIVING for Wheatley wanting more kisses. oh my gosh, i'm just-i'm just *cries* thank you for this wonderful fanfic

If this was canon I would imagine the following to happen at the end-

"I would tell her I'm really, truly sorry. It's a shame really. I never got that kiss..."
...
"SPPPPAAAAAACCCCEEE"

XD I'm dying of laughter here

Amazing. So very cute. Never thought I'd ship those two, but thanks to you darn you xD

Oh, sweetheart! Lovely, lovely, lovely! That's Wheatley all over (at least at the start), all awkward and adorable and I just want to give him a hug... or a kiss I suppose. So sweet...

I do admit to some curiosity as to what Chell was thinking. Was that just because he's adorable and to make a point? Because she's fully able to not-listen to GLaDOS, why can't she not-listen to Wheatley accidentally insulting her? But then again, it's nice-Wheatley who doesn't want to kill us! Who doesn't love nice-Wheatley...

That was funny and really cute. Wheatley's speech and character are perfect, and Chell's personality is fitting too.

thats all? thats just sad..

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww! Soooooooooooooo CUTE! 33333

This is really sweet.

Cute little story. Very well written. (:

Haha, that was nice! Very adorable. :3

Love this! Wheatley's is so adorable in this! And, he was written very well into character! This story is just so cute, I just want to eat it up! Though it is pretty sad that Wheatley won't get that second kiss though... But on a brighter note, this is a wonderful, sweet and well written story!

Okay that's just cute

You write a great Wheatley. This was funny and quite cute. Nice work.