I love you x I love this x

This is quite good. the plot so far is very good and the well placed splashes of humor and drama make it very enjoyable to read. given how old the story is, it seems unlikely that you will continue, but I hope that changes. I would love to see what comes next.

This is awesome, but I can't seem to get a read on what the pairing will be. Will it be sephiroth/cloud/Zack or sephiroth/cloud /Reno?

Hold on! Question. Are they...I mean like MxMxMxMxM as Genesis x Sephiroth x Cloud x Zack x Angael? please tell me, are they? If so, it would be awesome but interesting!

Please update OTL

*screeches into the void*

I know you haven't updated this in five years, but augh! Leaving it there...?! I just... I'm crying. This is SO GOOD. Most time travel fics make Cloud start over (which I thoroughly enjoy, but this is a really good take) and I am loving seeing him fully powered up just... Living in the past.

This is so good, and I hope you haven't given up on it but even if you have I'm going to read it over and over on days when I need a good pick-me-up fic!

Reverse harem. It will be quite a challange to balance the multilover scene. I mean, they have to share and you must be burden with the expectation from reader.

Well work. I will wait for you update *smile*

I dont know but i have a feeling that you will hook Cloud to Reno first .o

Not like i dont accept it, but i kind of love Zack/Cloud in your story. Slow build romance always good for entertaining *grin*

How young Zack is? XD
Jailbait indeed :3

Ooooh~ teacher Cloud ~
I enjoy reading this chapter. Well write~
*thumb up*

Wow Seph tried to prevent his jealousy. I need to see more of Zack :"

Wow. Sephiroth seem so fond of Cloud *grin*

Did Cloud become younger in this?

Godess, hojo know about Cloud! It was disaster Dx

At first i thought that Zack will accompany Cloud in time-traveling but you manage to surprise me *grin*

Zack so protective of Cloud, awww that is sweet.

Is it gonna be ASGZC?

You make such a great plot. Never think it will be like this. I love it~

Zack jealous~
I love the concept.
Its different from time-travel i have read.

A very nice story. I find it particularly interesting how Veld is used from the start to start to change things. Sephiroth's possessiveness is to the point that I thought he'd lose it on several occasions though.