i love the way you writte!
i hope you keep on writting about these two!

I've never read a fiction composed only of dialog but I was pleasantly surprised. Very nicely done.
-y

So wonderfully wonderful! It was so utterly sweet and all seemed to be perfectly in character! Thanks for writing!

Three months married with no physical intimacy, or at least an attempt by Brandon to bring it up? Wow. The idea is certainly original and I enjoyed reading your story.

To my knowledge the word confinement was used to describe the later stages of pregnancy, where a woman kept away from society. Am I right in supposing then, that Elinor has been pregnant (and thus married) longer than Marianne? Because I would find it unlikely that she would not speak to her sister, especially if she were caught unawares on her own wedding night.

I liked it! :)

Short and sweet, very in character, well written. Thank you for posting!

I'm having a hard time picturing it being THIS stilted, though I do have to confess I heard of one couple (passed on by now I guarantee you) who didn't do anythign for TWO YEARS!

I loved this. This is exactly how I envisioned them to be. Please continue this story. You have such a great foundation started. Please, Please continue...

wins

It was sweet,..I guess this is how they would have behaved, being all shy and reserved about such matters..you've shown all the delicacy..nice :)