WS good but it did NOT need an OC in the mix. It hurts the story. Also keep the number of girls down. Adding more girls seems cool but too much can get unbelievable. Ruby would NOT fit in with Naruto. The same with Moka little sister. She and Ruby are not Narutos type of woman. Good try though. Good luck.

He is to weak isn't he supposed to be the juubi?

Please update soon like 30 or more chapters and over 300,000 wordsO:-)

what about adding Moka and Kokoa's older sisters Aqua and Kahlua alongside lingling Huang, Ageha Kurono, Tsurara Shirayuki, Akasha Bloodriver, and San Otonashi to Naruto's harem.

Can u please make more chapters please it's so good

More awesome chapters please:-D

that was good keep the chapters coming

HEY please update this

Will you ever continue this story? I seriously hate cliffhangers or half-assed work!

Okay I am enjoying this story quite a bit. Even though it's been a long while since you have last updated this. Now I do hope that some day you would choose to continue this anyway keep up good work

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This chapter was awsome, please continue.

Awesome I'm loving this

Please continue this! It has a lot of potential and is an awesome read

Technically, that was Skulls son.