I really liked this. I think maybe you could have begun a bit earlier in time you know to establish the what if maybe a bit clearer. But I also understand that it's part of the dramatic effect to jump into the middle and so, as this is probably how Elliot felt, jumbled and shaken. So overall great job. Hopeful for a continuation, we need Stabler fics during S13.

Gosh, what's up with the Liv hater?

Anyways amazing chapter, the emotions by itself is just great!

Awesome! Keep it up, and thanks for sharing!

Awesome! Keep it up, and thanks for sharing!

I can't believe people would leave such nasty comments. I think this is great and hope that crap comments won't discourage you. Update soon, I'm liking it so far.

Wow. I'm blown away. I wish I could write like that.

Ok, LOVE IT. As with most crime shows, it's hard to find a reaaaalllly good IN CHARACTER E/O romance. There's plenty of Bensler out there, but it's mostly OOC. This, on the other hand, looks like it'll turn out to be AWESOMMMME. Elliot is written very, very, very well. Keep going, don't kill Olivia! But maybe kill whoever decided to screw up Meloni's contract negotiations.

Hopefully Olivia is okay, and I'm pretty sure thats how Elliot would have felt if Olivia got shot.

I,too, was disappointed with the finale. Thanks for writing. Can't wait to see what you have in store for us! Keep it up!

my favorite post-ep by far! can't wait for more

if Olvia needs to die then why read this fanfic which is about her? idiot.

Don't listen to a coward that can't even give their name in a review. THIS WAS AMAZING ! KEEP WRITING ! YOU HAVE TALENT :)

The finale left me feeling unfulfilled. This was fantastic. Also don't listen to someone who doesn't even leave their name when they comment. Keep writing!

One could only wish that Liv would have been killed. That would have made it the best episode ever. She needs to DIE.

Loved this. Very good )

Finally the REAL ending to Smoked.