This is wonderful! Sad, but well written. Kudos!

nice :)

Wow, this is absolutely spot-on. Very real. I love it!

Some introspection is never a bad thing. Great addition to the last story.

Awwww! Yes, yes, Thor! Jane's not the only one now, your poor, lost brother also gets that promise. Hey, true! Wow, awesome, sweet piece! Super love the ending.

Loved it.

Thor learns so much over the course of his story. Realizes just how poorly he acted and how it effected everyone. Himself. His country. His family. His brother. He pushed him away and that is the hardest thing to remedy now that he's realized what he has to do.

Loved Thor realizing the part that he played in things. I really like that after he fell to earth and met Jane he stopped being so arrogant and realized how he was treating people.

Love Thor's love for Loki here. "Jane isn't the only one he's going to get back." Beautiful. I think Thor would never give up on Loki. If he killed Jane - who has never done him any wrong, it would be purely out of spite - that might put him close to turning his back, I don't know.

Oh my! I love your writing, it's so honest, and portrays thoughts and emotions in such a realistic way. I just...love this, plain and simple.

Great Thor POV. I hope Thor does get back to Loki. It seems unlikely, after Avengers, but he still took him back to Asgard with him... I'm rather hopeful myself.

God, I loved that! So much! :)

This was amazing, despite being so short. I really enjoyed this little piece and your writing :)

*rants at Thor* Finally! You ox-brained fool! You finally got what's been going on! Thank you! Thor gets IT! ;)

Beautiful piece, just like "Far to Nowhere." :D

loved this ridiculously