Please update soon and keep it up! I like how you wrote their POV's. You gave good reason for Syrena's behavior and stayed true to her nature which is suppose to be mermaid, not pathetic at all. Yet you incorporated perfectly how her perception of Philip changed in the turn of events. What a great work! Keep it up!

i love this pairing please continue

Please keep writing, this pairing is awesome and your writing is incredible .

i love this story! this couple is very cute.

thanks for writing, update soon!

Hey, I like it so far. ) I don't see any errors or anything-sounds good!

Very interesting...keep on writing!

Hello! You're the first Philip/Syrena story I read and I chose wisely! :) I'll wait for the next chapters and please keep it up!

Sushiness

Loved it! I love how it's in Syrena's POV! Please update soon!

Much love!

C.G.

I luvv this story! R u gonna do the entire movie in Syrena's POV? Please do!

This is a good one. Keep it up.

I like the simplistic manner of Syrena's thoughts, not as in-depth as a human's but strangely unique and intriguing, and based off of instinct. I like that she didn't consider saving him, she just did.

PoFS

Nice job :)

Very nice chapter. I like the way you portray Syrena and the other mermaids. Quite convincing and appropriate. Update soon. I'm following this story hehe

There have been many stories about this pair told from Philip's point of view, but I'm glad to finally see one from Syrena's. I like how she originally doesn't like him but she's unconsciously curious of him. Please continue!

Lovely! I hope you continue this. :)