Reviews for The Bet |
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Guest chapter 1 . 9/24/2019 WE LOVE ITTTT |
Carl chapter 1 . 1/16/2019 The way you portrayed my character was rather offensive. I am offended. Please stop making fan fiction and delete yourself from the face of the internet. -Mr Fist |
GhettoZorceress chapter 1 . 8/9/2016 I'm ashamed of my self ಥ_ಥ |
Carl Wheezer chapter 1 . 7/17/2016 Agh! You don't see much of this ship! The whole thing was very well-written, and you really didn't break away from the character's canon behavior, despite y'know, the gay sex. Disney hasn't shown that...yet... Anyways, this story was written amaqzingly, give yourself a congratulatory pat on the back! 11/10 |
AwesomeOne chapter 1 . 3/3/2015 I love this fic. If you would like my personal opinion, I would have had Monogram lay Carl down on his desk and finished him off there. But it was amazing this way too. Probably will read it a few more times in the future. I love Monogram and Carl! |
Awesomeness chapter 1 . 11/17/2014 This was the best thing I've ever read! |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/9/2014 It was good. I loved the shota |
Cerucci chapter 1 . 10/3/2013 this was so cute and awesome, i love it, it's normally so hard to find a pairing for Major Monogram and Carl. |
Roseheart4271 chapter 1 . 7/5/2013 More. u 3 You're really good at this, you should seriously write more! / |
Gabygody chapter 1 . 10/17/2012 This is pedophile, but also... IS GREAT! ;_; I Speak Spanish and is a great honor read this! XD (?) Wow, this is your first sex scene? but is very good! :P Im sorry for my bad english :P Note: Iamuser,butIhavenuisanceLogininthism oment xD |
loveinuyashatoshiro chapter 1 . 9/12/2012 it's great |
Birdiaction chapter 1 . 4/27/2012 OH. MY GOSH. This was SO HOT. Seriously, you are AMAZING. O_O Gaaahhh. I just know I'm going to be reading it AGAIN AND AGAIN. |
BakaRamenBowl chapter 1 . 9/11/2011 im going to hell for my curiosity, but it's oh so worth it. the irony of this is my siblings are watching Phineas and Ferb right now. |
Skai Evans chapter 1 . 8/27/2011 W-wow...that was amazing... |
SometimesRecovery7 chapter 1 . 8/18/2011 Wonderful. |