;A; This fic was so sad. Ouch, my heart.
This fic was beautifully written. Minnesota’s character, her interactions with others, and her slow descent into madness was well written. You really did her justice.
I really felt the impact of Maysilee’s death on everyone: not just Minnesota, our main character, but also on Maysilee’s parents and Wes and Briony and Haymitch.
I liked the ending line because you leave it so open and bittersweet. With Minnesota wearing a new skirt, it almost seems like she’s recovering… but just the scene before she’s injecting morphling into her veins, and well, she’s still so broken. Everyone is so broken. ;A;
Irma
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this was breathtaking.

I can read this over and over again, I love your writing style!

This is really good! But her name was Marilyn donner not Minnesota. But it was so good! I love how her sickness develops between different relationships between characters and final acceptance that her sister was dead. Also how she took Wes. Scandalous! :) great

Job !

Wow, this is amazing.

Ugh. My heart just feels sort of hollow and empty now. This is so heartbreakingly realistic. You've given the characters so much depth that it's impossible to not feel what they're feeling. This is just simply amazing.

This is very haunting. The way you portrayed Minnesota is just how I imagined her would be. Losing someone that close to you is unbearable and you did a fine job portraying her and the other characters. Great job as always.

- this was too beautiful and i honestly don't know what to say other than, bravo, you should be a deity.

Gorgeous, gorgeous story. It's been a while since I've read The Hunger Games, and so it very much surprised me to paw through the other reviews and realise that Briony is very much Katniss' mom, that Wes Undersee is the very mayor we experience in the books. Your writing is phenomenal, and you do a fantastic job of bringing the reader right into the situation. The emotion in this piece is almost tangible and so good in that way.

I look forward to reading more of your work!

wow. i love all the hints of haymitch/maysilee, wes/maysilee, haymitch/minnesota, and wes/minnesota (though that last isn't just a hint, i guess.)

Fantastic

Love it. *Favorited*

Hi :) I read this right after you posted it and thought I reviewed, but then checked and realized I didn't. Haha. Anyway.

This was, in a word, brilliant. I can kinda see where last month's prompt would have fit in, and I'm sad you didn't finish it in time for it to be entered, because I have a feeling that it would have been fantastic.

I liked how clearly you could see the progression as she slowly became addicted to morphling, and I really liked the parts you added about her wearing Maysilee's old dresses and being jealous of Katniss' mom (I forget what name you gave her) when she got Maysilee's canary instead if her. Also, I adored your choice of Minnesota for Mrs. Undersee's name.

And HAYMITCH. Gahh. I lovelovelove how you write the younger version of him. I just love how you write him in general, if we're being honest.

Overall, beautiful piece of work, as always :)

Love, Dom

*sob* perfectly horrible and I loved every word of it.

wow This is very different and wonderful - I usually don't jump for the maysillee stuff but this is just lovely. conveys quiet sorrow and kindness at the same time.