Yassss that was awesome.

Chuck you are brilliant! Gosh. I would have not imagine this is how the story would flow. I considered the idea of Chuck writing their life via Supernatural verse... you gave me sonething better. Castiel is such a teddy bear! He's too adorable and interrupted to just leave alone. Dean is ever the man you wish to count on; the righteous man. C;
Sam, Andy, Tracie, Jo, Gabriel and Baltazar have a share of laughs through this piece. Gorgeous.

that is by far my favorite destiel fic
absoluty beautifully written. i love the idea of chuck narrating. and then all that fluff? wow, just wow
perfect, this is worth a nobel prize, im just under such an i love how you included kali. i just fucking love this fic!you sir, are an amzing person
kisses and hugs

"...to which Sam glared and threw a baby at him. "

funny typo you have there :-)

great story 3

Really well done! Lengthy but not in a long-winded way, sweet, innovative in narration and format...altogether, well-executed and very enjoyable.

"So, you were the one who grabbed that stick up Cas's ass and shoved yours up there in its place?"

I've been laughing SO hard at this! I wanna say that this IS the best line in history. I read a lot of books and fanfictions, but nothing can be compared to this epic and natural sentence. Sounds exactly like

Wow, I absolutely loved this fic. You've done a great job!

This has got to be one of my favourite Destiel fics ever. Thankyou so much for writing it!
Rose

This was utter perfection! I mean... Just wow! I absolutely adored this story!

so great. excellent story. )

That was so cute! And very well written. Enthuse for Kaitouahiru!

Aw my gosh that was amazing! You captured Chuck's writing style so accurately, even though we only had one episode of him actually narrating Supernatural. It's one of the best Destiel fics I've ever read!

At first, I was slightly skeptical of reading an Alternative Universe Destiel butnonce I saw on your Author's note that it was 65 pages, I just began reading! I know how it feels to write so much, trust me! Your story was AMAZING! Why you no have more reviews? Chuck's point of view was comical and the characterization of Balthezar, I loved it! Please continue to write and share your talent! :)

My goodness.

I really loved your story! It was very well written and made me smile the whole way through! I really liked that you let Chuck narrate the story, very original and it gave an intimate feeling to the story. The ending made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside :) I like happy endings. Keep writing the good stuff!