This was so lovely!

wtf is this faggot shit you fucked up the story with that faggot shit must be a faggot who wrote it

Fun, creative, and delightful. Mary Poppins would be proud! Also, I like the "Albus Dumbledore is a manipulative jerk and Ron and Hermione were coattail riders all along" take. It's certainly unique.

So much fun! I’m enjoying the various allusions! And Delightful to see people “zing” Dumbledore!

'Queen of all Evil'? Watch Maleficent, then think again

This was a wonderful story!

This was a great chapter but I absolutely loved Neville's and Harry's conversation. Well done!

So this is slash then? This should be mentioned at the start!

Lovely story. Old Dumbles was by expecting what he got hahaha.

Great job!

Terrific.

I see why you went with the other version but this was excellent.

Great ending? Loved Harry’s development and smart mouth. Supporting characters were outstanding. Loved relationships among the boys

Or is it the end

I like it. (Even though Hermione is one of my favorite characters. However, it’s your story and I will go with it. Besides I get plenty of Neville

Hopefully we get to see Luna.

I’m really enjoying this story Mary Poppins is one of my favourite childhood films ever and I really like how you’ve characterised Maleficent. If I correctly remember from the sleeping beauty fairy tale it took place in a medieval kingdom and the king and queen had this big ceremony for Aurora’s birth where everyone but maleficent was invited so she probably felt very insulted

Begs the question on what would have happened if MIM had been one of Harry's godmothers...