| Reviews for Shuichi Secret |
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  Sabrina linzy chapter 2 . 9/1/2017 Can you please write some more on this story i like to read something different then shuichi a boy i want to read about shuichi being a girl. |
| Sabrina linzy chapter 1 . 8/21/2017 Can you finish writing a story like this Shuichi secret write like 30 chapters or 20 please |
 Deb41 chapter 2 . 7/31/2014 Please continue! |
| YaoiHimeSama chapter 3 . 11/18/2013 Please update . Hope you find insperation for your next chapter :). |
| Hopelle chapter 3 . 6/21/2013 please hurry and make more chapters it sounds interesting |
| damons-hot-as-hell chapter 2 . 1/26/2012 please update |
| Yuki-n-Shuichi4evrfan33 chapter 2 . 10/19/2011 YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! Another chapter finally! I like it! NOOOOOOOOOOOO EIRI DON'T DIE! I can try and give you ideas if you need me to, oh by the way, have you ever gotten a chance to read the femShuichi story I finished? Hope you can update really soon! |
| XxX chapter 1 . 10/6/2011 Big round butt and Double D's? This could turn into an interesting porno. |
| Eternally Retold chapter 1 . 9/27/2011 Hmn... I kind of like how your plot is going, though your story needs more detail. You need work on your grammar a little- no... ALOT more! When I meant detail, /I mean/ detail. You have to give thought on how Shuichi would think and his reactions to Yuki's cold-hearted demeanor. Yuki seemed out-of-character to me, to be honest. Read all of Gravitation again to get the feel of how each character is in his/her way and their interactions with each other. You need to type out what you think they are about to do. You also need a theasaurus. (Not sure if I spelled that word right.) It should be useful and you'll learn new words to use! w Anyways, I bid you good luck~! ...Eternally Retold. |
| epic fail chapter 1 . 9/27/2011 Learn ENGLISH GRAMMAR before posting anything else! This is utterly DREADFUL! You have Zero Talent. |
| L and misa for eternity chapter 2 . 9/26/2011 i really like your story it is pretty good. i hope there is more to come i can hardly wait for the nexted chapter. good luck on it |
| lilgurlanima chapter 2 . 9/24/2011 what did tohma exactly do for them to separate like that? |
| SpongeyCashewNut chapter 1 . 7/11/2011 Check your spelling and grammar. Also, please indent it...it's a blob of text. The transition is...kind of choppy and rushed. Work on the flow. And plus, making one of the guys in the BL coupling ruins the image of BL. It's quite descriptive though. |
| lilgurlanima chapter 1 . 5/20/2011 that's a good start... i wanna know the mystery and secret of shuichi further.. pls check th spelling... goodluck! :) |
| Yuki-n-Shuichi4evrfan33 chapter 1 . 5/16/2011 Oh my god, that was good, you might want to recheck spelling though. I love that outfit. |
