I enjoy how you was hot and sweet. This is the only couple i ship from there so they are all look for in BOK stories. I look foward to reading more from you on these two.:-) and if you dont write more I'm glad you wrote what you did

Job well done! I hope you keep writing these two. Love them tougher.

Umm, hellz yes, it was enjoyable! Not sure why, but the 'he created thunder' line cracked me up! That is so totally Lloyd. But he did his thing - I think I might have to wipe a bit of steam off the computer screen!

Well done!

I loved this story! I think you did splendidly well :) I was so excited when I got on FF today and found that Breakout Kings had gotten its own link under TV shows! :D I am so obsessed with this show its a little crazy so thank you for fueling my obsession! :) Great job and can't wait to read more of your work!

-Iluvdolphins-

Well done!