So much adorableness. :3

I did notice a few grammar/spelling errors (for instance, I believe at one point it says "aggitation"), and for some reason all of your italics looked like this: iword/i.

Ignoring that, though, this story was beautiful. I loved it.

This is beautiful.

Just lovely. Thanks.

"Pondered why exactly fate would punish this woman. Why anyone would?"

Exactly. I suppose fate is cruel like that sometimes.

It's very fortunate that they can have little things like this in between the bad endings at either end of their story. You wrote it beautifully!

I love this! Perfect.

Aww, now that was sweet and heartbreaking as it usually is with these two.

wonderfully written. You captured River so perfectly it was amazingly compelling.

DOCTOR/RIVER/TARDIS. YOU WIN THE UNIVERSE.

Oh I love it so much. SO MUCH.

*hugs it*